Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on grammatical accuracy, conciseness and clearer organisation. Start with a direct topic sentence, avoid repetition, correct verb forms and article use, and limit to 3–4 concise sentences. Add a brief specific detail (e.g., what you photograph and why) using a linking word such as “because” or “so”.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views because I’m a blogger and want to preserve beautiful scenes. For example, I often photograph coastal sunsets and city skylines, which I later review to plan posts. Looking back at photos helps me remember the atmosphere of a place.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer first (e.g., 'I like both') and then support it with two specific contrasting reasons using linking words such as 'because' and 'whereas'. Avoid repetition and use more precise vocabulary (e.g., 'urban skylines', 'rural landscapes', 'scenery'). Keep to 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I like both urban and rural views because each offers different qualities. Urban areas provide dramatic architecture and lively street scenes, whereas rural areas offer peaceful landscapes and natural details. For example, I photograph colorful market streets in cities and misty fields in the countryside.

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatical answer and add a specific reason. Avoid unclear words ('wheels') and vague phrases. Use one linking word like 'because' and provide a concrete example comparing a local place and a foreign place. Keep it concise (2–3 sentences).

Exemplo: I prefer views everywhere because I enjoy photographing different cultures and landscapes. For instance, I like capturing historic temples in my country and colorful street scenes when I travel abroad.

× Yes, I like take pictures of different views because I am Blogger and I want to save save beautiful views in my memories.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I am a blogger and I want to save beautiful views in my memories.

Errors: missing gerund after 'like' (should be 'like taking'), missing article before 'blogger' ('a blogger'), duplicated word 'save'. Suggestion: Use the gerund form after verbs of liking/disliking (like + -ing), include indefinite article for occupations, and remove duplicated words. Example: 'I like taking pictures...' and 'I am a blogger.'

× And I like in sometimes go to my photos and watch photos which I made and some days before, some years before.

✓ Sometimes I like to go through my photos and look at pictures I took days or years before.

Errors: incorrect word order ('I like in sometimes'), wrong verb form 'made' for photos (use past simple 'took'), awkward phrase 'watch photos' (use 'look at' or 'go through'). Suggestion: Place adverbs of frequency (sometimes) before the main verb or at the beginning of the clause; use appropriate verbs for photography ('take' for creating photos, 'look at' for viewing).

× Open area, central areas are different.

✓ Open areas and central areas are different.

Errors: missing conjunction 'and' between noun phrases and inconsistent singular/plural ('Open area' vs 'central areas'). Suggestion: Use parallel structure and consistent plurality: 'open areas and central areas'.

× I like to take, I like taking pictures of both of them because in city it's different, different view, different picture, different photo.

✓ I like taking pictures of both because in the city you get different views and different kinds of photos.

Errors: repetitive phrasing and missing article before 'city' ('the city'), inconsistent noun forms. Suggestion: Use either 'like to take' or 'like taking' but not both; include 'the' with 'city' when speaking generally about urban areas; make nouns plural and reduce repetition.

× And in rural area it's an about nature, it's about aesthetic.

✓ And in rural areas it's about nature and aesthetics.

Errors: missing plural for 'rural area' -> 'rural areas', unnecessary 'an', incorrect phrase 'about aesthetic' (use 'aesthetics' or 'aesthetic value'). Suggestion: Use plural when speaking generally and use the noun 'aesthetics' to describe visual appeal.

× But in city the aesthetic aesthetic can be too.

✓ But in the city there can be aesthetics too.

Errors: missing article before 'city' ('the city'), duplicated word 'aesthetic', awkward structure 'can be too'. Suggestion: Use 'there can be' to state existence and avoid unnecessary repetition; 'aesthetics' is the correct noun form.

× I prefer wheels everywhere because every place is different.

✓ I prefer to travel everywhere because every place is different.

Errors: 'prefer wheels' is unclear and likely incorrect usage; 'prefer to travel' fits the context. Suggestion: Use verbs that match intended meaning—if student means 'go around' or 'travel', say 'travel' or 'visit'.

× In my country a lot of amazing places and abroad a lot of so much fascinating places.

✓ There are a lot of amazing places in my country, and there are many fascinating places abroad.

Errors: missing verb 'are' (sentence structure / 'there be' issue), awkward quantifier 'a lot of so much', incorrect word order. Suggestion: Use 'There are' to introduce existence and 'many' or 'a lot of' consistently: 'There are a lot of amazing places in my country, and many fascinating places abroad.'