Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and organize your answer: start with a clear topic sentence, give one or two specific reasons with examples, and avoid filler words (uh, umm, you know). Use linking words to connect ideas. Also correct grammar (e.g., 'I'm an architecture student' and 'every building').

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. As an architecture student, I find buildings especially meaningful because they reflect history and design; for example, I often photograph facades to study proportions and ornamentation.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer, then give specific reasons and an example. Avoid vague phrases like 'these types of building' and filler words. Use linking words (because, for example) and correct grammar ('ancient buildings').

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they have well-preserved, ancient buildings and quieter landscapes. For example, I like photographing old stone cottages and temples where details are easier to study without crowds.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer and complete the thought instead of trailing off. Provide one or two specific reasons and an example, using linking words (because, however). Remove fillers and improve sentence structure ('as an architect' phrase should be integrated).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because we have many historical and traditional buildings that inspire my architectural studies. However, I also enjoy visiting other countries occasionally because their modern designs can provide fresh ideas.

× I'm really interested in taking pictures of everything actually, uh, maybe because I'm, umm, architecture student and, you know, every moment is like really meaningful for me and, you know, every, uh, buildings and.

✓ I'm really interested in taking pictures of everything, actually, maybe because I'm an architecture student, and every moment feels really meaningful to me, including buildings.

The errors involve article usage and sentence structure. 'Architecture student' requires the indefinite article 'an' before a noun phrase starting with a vowel sound. 'Every buildings' is incorrect because 'every' must be followed by a singular noun, so 'every building' or rephrase as 'including buildings.' Also cleaned up filler words and improved sentence flow for clarity and grammaticality. Suggested improvement: include appropriate articles ('a'/'an'/'the') before nouns and use 'every' with singular nouns; reduce filler words to improve fluency.

× Although both of them have their own pros and cons, I would definitely go with rural areas because I really like these types of building and you know, I'm really into, uh, the ancient.

✓ Although both have their pros and cons, I would definitely choose rural areas because I really like these types of buildings, and I'm really into ancient architecture.

'Types of building' should use the plural 'buildings' after 'types of'. Also 'both of them' is wordy; 'both' suffices. 'The ancient' is incomplete; specify 'ancient architecture'. Suggested improvement: ensure nouns agree in number with modifiers (e.g., 'types of' + plural noun) and finish noun phrases clearly.

× I prefer my own country because I think, uh, we have a lot of historical buildings and you know, I'm really into traditional architecture. So as an architect, umm, some new places can be very interesting for me, but.

✓ I prefer my own country because we have a lot of historical buildings and I'm really into traditional architecture. As an architect, some new places can also be very interesting to me.

The original ends with a trailing 'but' and has unnecessary fillers, causing sentence fragment issues. Replaced 'you know' and 'umm' and removed the dangling 'but' to produce complete, grammatically correct sentences. Suggested improvement: avoid sentence fragments and trailing conjunctions; remove excessive fillers and complete contrasting statements (if using 'but' include the contrasting clause).