Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and fluency: correct verb forms and remove filler words. Give a clear topic sentence and one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

Exemplo: Not really. I rarely take photos because I prefer experiencing a place in the moment rather than documenting it. For example, when I travel I spend time observing the scenery and talking to locals, so I don’t usually stop to take pictures.

Sugestão: Correct subject-verb agreement and add a linking word and a specific detail to strengthen your answer. Begin with a clear topic sentence, then explain why with an example or comparison.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas. Because there are fewer people, I can enjoy nature more freely and hear birds and rivers, which I find relaxing. For instance, I like walking on quiet country trails instead of crowded city streets.

Sugestão: Make the answer directly address the question (own country or other countries) and link your personal change to that preference. Use one clear sentence saying which you prefer, then give a brief reason with a specific example.

Exemplo: I don't have a strong preference between my country and other countries. Lately I've learned to appreciate views everywhere, so whether I'm at home or abroad I try to stay present and enjoy the scene. For example, last month I noticed the same peaceful feeling watching a sunrise at home and during a trip abroad.

× I'm not into photographs to be honest.

✓ I'm not into photography, to be honest.

The word 'photographs' is a plural noun referring to individual pictures. The speaker means the activity or hobby, which is 'photography' (a noun uncountable in this sense). Replace the plural noun with the uncountable noun 'photography' and keep the phrase 'to be honest' after a comma for natural speech flow. Suggestion: Use 'photography' when referring to the activity, and 'photographs' only when referring to specific pictures.

× I barely takes any photos because I'm uh, very experiencing person.

✓ I barely take any photos because I'm, uh, a person who likes to experience things.

The verb 'takes' does not agree with the subject 'I'; the correct form is 'take'. Also 'very experiencing person' is ungrammatical English: 'experiencing' is not used that way. I rephrased to 'a person who likes to experience things' which conveys the intended meaning. Suggestion: ensure verbs after 'I' use base form and use appropriate adjective or relative clause to describe the person. Alternative concise correction: 'I barely take any photos because I'm, uh, an experiential person.' but 'a person who likes to experience things' is clearer.

× Often just experiencing things rather than taking pictures.

✓ I often just experience things rather than take pictures.

This fragment lacks a clear subject and uses inconsistent verb forms. Adding the subject 'I' and using the base verbs 'experience' and 'take' (parallel structure) makes the sentence complete and grammatically parallel. Suggestion: keep parallel verb forms and include the subject in standalone sentences.

× I often prefers rural areas because in rural areas there's less population and I can see the nature more freely.

✓ I often prefer rural areas because there is less population in rural areas and I can enjoy nature more freely.

The verb 'prefers' does not agree with the subject 'I'; use 'prefer'. Also 'there's less population' is informal and slightly awkward; 'there is less population' is acceptable but better phrased as 'there is a smaller population' or 'rural areas are less populated'. 'See the nature' is unnatural in English; use 'enjoy nature' or 'see nature'. I reworded for naturalness and clarity. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and use idiomatic expressions like 'enjoy nature' or 'rural areas are less populated'.

× Since last year I became a real grateful person.

✓ Since last year I have become a truly grateful person.

The time expression 'Since last year' requires present perfect ('have become') to show a change that began in the past and continues. 'Real grateful' is nonstandard; use the adverb 'truly' or 'really' before the adjective 'grateful'. Suggestion: use present perfect with 'since' and place adverbs ('truly', 'really') correctly before adjectives.

× I feel really grateful seeing whatever and wherever I am, like I'm really in the present moment and I enjoy everything I see.

✓ I feel really grateful for whatever and wherever I am; I'm really in the present moment and I enjoy everything I see.

The original sentence uses 'feeling grateful seeing' which is understandable but slightly awkward. Adding the preposition 'for' makes the object of 'grateful' clear ('grateful for whatever and wherever I am'). The rest is fine but benefits from clearer punctuation; I used a semicolon to connect related clauses. Suggestion: use 'grateful for' to indicate the cause of gratitude and ensure clear clause connections.