Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời tự nhiên và rõ ràng nhưng có vài lỗi ngữ pháp nhỏ, từ dùng chưa chính xác và hơi dài. Nên bắt đầu bằng một câu chủ đề ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "taking pictures" lặp), sửa cụm từ không phù hợp ("photography is a wave" không chuẩn) và chia thành tối đa 3–4 câu. Thêm một chi tiết cụ thể về kiểu cảnh bạn thích để tăng độ phong phú nội dung.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views, especially natural landscapes. I enjoy photographing sunsets and coastal scenes because the light and colours are always changing. Photography helps me capture memorable moments and the unique beauty of places I visit.

Sugestão: Ý tưởng rõ nhưng có lỗi từ vựng và ngữ pháp ("rural area bars" sai; nên là "rural areas"). Câu hơi dài, nên tách thành câu chủ đề + 1 câu bổ trợ. Thêm ví dụ cụ thể về một cảnh nông thôn bạn yêu thích giúp câu trả lời cụ thể hơn. Sử dụng từ nối hợp lý (for example, because) để mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer open space, fresh air and natural scenery. For example, I love walking through rice fields and small villages, which helps me feel relaxed after a busy week in the city.

Sugestão: Nội dung có ý tốt nhưng có lỗi ngữ pháp và thiếu mạch lạc cuối câu ("which brought" không hoàn chỉnh). Nên mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề ngắn, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (ví dụ: tên nơi, kỉ niệm) và kết luận ngắn về quan điểm với liên từ phù hợp (however, but). Tránh để câu chưa hoàn chỉnh.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they feel familiar and are linked to many personal memories. For instance, I often revisit the coastal hills near my hometown where I used to go on family trips. However, I also enjoy landscapes abroad for their novelty and different cultures.

× I definitely adore taking pictures of different views, especially taking photos of the beautiful nature because photography is a wave that helps me to capture memorable moments and the beauty of place I visit.

✓ I definitely adore taking pictures of different views, especially photos of beautiful nature, because photography is a way for me to capture memorable moments and the beauty of the places I visit.

Original errors: 'taking photos of the beautiful nature' is wordy and uses an unnecessary 'taking' gerund twice; 'a wave' is incorrect word choice and should be 'a way'; 'the beauty of place I visit' misses article and plural. Suggestions: avoid repeating the same gerund unnecessarily, choose correct noun ('way' not 'wave'), use articles and plural correctly ('the places I visit').

× I prefer views in rural area bars because they offer me open space, fresh air and natural scenery that can help me feel relaxed and comfortable after a busy week in the city.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because they offer open space, fresh air, and natural scenery that help me feel relaxed and comfortable after a busy week in the city.

Original errors: 'rural area bars' is incorrect — 'areas' (plural) is needed and 'bars' is extraneous; 'they offer me' is acceptable but more natural to say 'offer' without 'me'; 'that can help me' is wordy. Suggestions: use correct plural 'rural areas', remove unintended word 'bars', simplify phrasing to 'offer open space' and 'that help me'.

× I truly prefer views in my own country more because they're more familiar and have many memories for me.

✓ I truly prefer views in my own country because they are more familiar and hold many memories for me.

Original errors: 'prefer... more' is redundant (prefer already indicates comparison); contraction 'they're' is okay but use 'they are' for formality; 'have many memories for me' is awkward — use 'hold many memories for me'. Suggestions: remove redundant 'more', use natural verbs like 'hold' or 'evoke' with 'memories'.

× However, I also appreciate landscape abroad for their novelty and cultural difference which brought.

✓ However, I also appreciate landscapes abroad for their novelty and cultural differences.

Original errors: 'landscape abroad' should be plural 'landscapes abroad'; 'their novelty and cultural difference' needs plural 'differences'; the clause 'which brought' is incomplete and ungrammatical. Suggestions: use plural nouns to agree with 'their', remove the incomplete relative clause or complete it (for example, 'which they bring') — simpler: 'for their novelty and cultural differences'.