Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cần cải thiện ngữ pháp (số nhiều/đếm được), chia động từ và rút gọn câu lặp. Hãy dùng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, nối ý bằng liên từ và cung cấp chi tiết cụ thể (địa điểm, cảm xúc) nhưng giữ tối đa 5 câu. Ví dụ: sửa 'photo' thành 'photos', tránh lặp 'take photos' quá nhiều, và kết hợp câu ví dụ mạch lạc hơn.

Exemplo: Yes, I love photographing nature and architecture because they capture unique moods and history. They also help me remember places I visited, so I often take photos of sunsets over the ocean and old historic buildings. When I shoot sunsets, I try to include silhouettes to show scale. These images usually make me feel nostalgic and calm.

Sugestão: Cần sửa cấu trúc câu và ngữ pháp để rõ ràng (ví dụ: 'I prefer views in rural areas' thay vì 'I would refer views'). Loại bỏ lỗi từ vựng ('why green feels' không đúng) và dùng liên từ để nối lý do. Thêm chi tiết cụ thể (mô tả khung cảnh, âm thanh, mùi) nhưng giữ ngắn gọn và chính xác.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because the countryside is quieter and has wide open spaces. For example, small farmhouses, winding dirt roads and friendly locals create a peaceful atmosphere. I also enjoy the sounds of birds and distant tractors, which feel far less stressful than city noise.

Sugestão: Cần chỉnh ngữ pháp và mạch ý: tránh mâu thuẫn và sửa cấu trúc cuối câu ('the view is my own country feel' sai). Nên bắt đầu với câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích lý do với ví dụ cụ thể, rồi kết luận ngắn gọn so sánh cảm giác thân thuộc và tò mò. Giữ dưới 5 câu và dùng từ vựng phù hợp.

Exemplo: I slightly prefer views in other countries because they inspire me to explore new cultures and landscapes. For instance, I enjoy photographing unfamiliar architecture and local markets, which teach me about everyday life abroad. At the same time, scenery at home feels more familiar and comforting, so I appreciate both for different reasons.

× I enjoy taking photo of various views.

✓ I enjoy taking photos of various views.

The noun 'photo' should be plural 'photos' because 'various views' implies multiple pictures. Use plural with quantifiers like 'various'. Suggestion: Use plural nouns when referring to multiple items: 'photos'.

× Especially when I take the photos, they remind me of the places I have visited.

✓ Especially when I take photos, they remind me of the places I have visited.

Redundant article 'the' before 'photos' is unnecessary when speaking generally. Also maintain plural 'photos' to match 'they'. Suggestion: Omit 'the' for general statements: 'when I take photos'.

× For example, I often take photo of sunset over the oceans or historic buildings.

✓ For example, I often take photos of sunsets over the ocean or of historic buildings.

Multiple errors: 'photo' should be plural 'photos'; 'sunset' should be plural 'sunsets' when speaking generally; 'the oceans' is awkward—use 'the ocean' or no article; add 'of' before 'historic buildings' for parallelism. Suggestion: Use plural nouns for general habits and keep parallel structure: 'photos of sunsets over the ocean or of historic buildings'.

× I would refer views in rural areas because I find the countryside much quieter and full of open spaces.

✓ I would prefer views in rural areas because I find the countryside much quieter and full of open spaces.

Wrong verb 'refer' used; correct verb is 'prefer'. Suggestion: Use 'prefer' to express choice or preference: 'I would prefer views in rural areas'.

× For instance, why green feels small farmhouses and hospitable local people which make countryside more relaxing than busy cities.

✓ For instance, green fields, small farmhouses, and hospitable local people make the countryside more relaxing than busy cities.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and disordered. 'Why' is incorrect here; items need to be listed with commas and parallel structure. Add articles and correct noun 'green fields'. Suggestion: Use a clear list and parallel structure: 'green fields, small farmhouses, and hospitable local people make the countryside more relaxing'.

× I slightly prefer views in other countries because they always motivate me to explore new things and I enjoy taking photos of the places I have visited.

✓ I slightly prefer views in other countries because they always motivate me to explore new things and I enjoy taking photos of the places I visit.

Tense refinement: 'have visited' is acceptable but 'visit' fits habitual action; however primary issue is consistency. Plural 'photos' is correct. Suggestion: Use simple present when describing general habits: 'places I visit'.

× That being said, the view is my own country feel more familiar and comforting.

✓ That being said, views in my own country feel more familiar and comforting.

Word order and article use are incorrect. 'The view is my own country' is ungrammatical. Use plural 'views' and prepositional phrase 'in my own country'. Suggestion: Use 'views in my own country' to express which views feel familiar: 'views in my own country feel more familiar and comforting'.