Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and accurate: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and incorrect names, and add one specific detail to enrich the answer. Use linking words to connect ideas. Also correct factual phrasing (e.g. 'Namsan Mountain' once, and 'the Han River is near my house').

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I often take pictures on Namsan Mountain because it offers panoramic city views, and I also photograph the Han River near my house, especially at sunset when the light is beautiful.

Sugestão: Give a clear direct answer, remove hesitations and repetitions, and provide one or two specific reasons with linking words (for example, 'because' or 'so'). Replace filler sounds with precise vocabulary like 'architecture' or 'skylines'.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing architecture and city skylines; for example, I like capturing the contrast of modern glass towers and older buildings, which creates interesting compositions.

Sugestão: Respond directly and avoid vague phrases. State preference clearly, give a concise reason and a specific example, and avoid unnecessary repetition. Use linking words such as 'because' and 'for example'.

Exemplo: I prefer taking pictures in my own country, especially in Seoul, because I know the best spots and times for photography; for example, I often shoot the city from Namsan at dawn when the light highlights the skyline.

× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.

Remove unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in affirmative present simple sentences. In present simple positive statements we normally use the base verb (I like), not 'I do like' unless for emphasis.

× I love to take a picture in Namsan Namsan Mountain, a Nam mountain, and I love to take a picture of a Han River which is in front of my house.

✓ I love to take pictures at Namsan Mountain, and I also love to take pictures of the Han River in front of my house.

Subject-verb agreement and article use: 'Namsan Mountain' does not need repetition or 'a Nam mountain'. Use plural 'pictures' to match the activity. Use preposition 'at' for locations like mountains and omit the definite article before 'Han River' when using its proper name; 'the Han River' is acceptable, but keep consistency: 'the Han River' is correct. Also simplify redundant phrasing.

× And actually the Han River is the biggest river.

✓ Actually, the Han River is the largest river.

Adjective choice: 'biggest' and 'largest' are both superlatives; 'largest' is more natural for rivers. Also add comma after 'Actually' for clarity.

× Yeah, I, I prefer oven I areas because it's the, uh, urban areas is where you can, uh, see the cities and, uh, different buildings, which I like the most.

✓ Yes, I prefer urban areas because you can see the city and different buildings there, which I like the most.

Sentence structure and redundancy: 'oven I areas' is likely a transcription error; use 'urban areas'. Remove filler words and correct verb agreement: 'urban areas is' should be 'urban areas are' or restructure to 'you can see the city'. Avoid repeated pronouns and place 'there' for location.

× I love to take a picture of the building and I love, I love buildings.

✓ I love to take pictures of buildings.

Singular/plural issue and redundancy: Use plural 'pictures' and 'buildings' to express general preference, and remove repetition 'I love, I love' for fluency.

× Actually, I love my country where is so I think Seoul is the most beautiful uh city in the world and I live in Seoul, so I can take a photo of the Seoul city uh, very easily.

✓ Actually, I love my country. I think Seoul is the most beautiful city in the world, and since I live in Seoul I can take photos of the city very easily.

Sentence structure and word order: 'where is so' is incorrect—split into two sentences for clarity. Use 'city' without 'the' when referring generally, or 'the city' when specifying Seoul; use 'photos' plural and place 'since I live in Seoul' to show reason.

× So I like taking pictures in my area very so.

✓ So I like taking pictures in my area very much.

Incorrect adverb/phrase: 'very so' is not correct English. Use 'very much' to modify 'like taking pictures' in present tense.