Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition, and give one or two specific examples with brief reasons. Use linking words (for example, such as, because) and correct verb forms (I prefer, I enjoy).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I prefer taking photos of different situations, especially peaceful natural scenes and lively events like concerts, because they capture emotions and atmosphere. For example, I recently photographed a sunset over a lake and a crowd enjoying a music show, which showed very different moods.

Sugestão: Answer directly, then support with a specific reason and example. Reduce fillers (uh, so) and correct grammar (I enjoy, especially rural areas because). Use a linking word like because or for example to structure the response.

Exemplo: I generally prefer rural views because I like natural landscapes and quieter scenes. For example, when I stayed at a camp recently I took many photos of the village forest, enjoying the peaceful atmosphere and natural light.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct answer and then qualify it. Avoid unclear phrases like “different 1” and aim for correct sentence structures. Use linking words (however, but) and provide a brief reason or example for each preference.

Exemplo: I enjoy views in both my own country and abroad. However, if I had to choose, I value my country’s familiar landscapes for their cultural meaning, while views abroad offer new perspectives and unique architecture. For instance, I love local coastal scenes at home, but I also enjoyed photographing historic streets when I traveled.

× Actually, I'm really that kind of person who prefer to take a picture of different, different situations, events and of course views such as really peaceful and joyful views on events such as concerts and some natural pictures.

✓ Actually, I'm the kind of person who prefers to take pictures of different situations and events, and of course views, such as peaceful and joyful scenes at concerts and natural landscapes.

Subject-pronoun and verb agreement: 'who' refers to 'the kind of person' (singular), so the verb must be 'prefers' (third person singular). Use plural 'pictures' when speaking generally. Simplify 'such as really peaceful and joyful views on events such as concerts and some natural pictures' to clearer nouns: 'scenes at concerts' and 'natural landscapes'. Avoid repeating 'different' and unnecessary words. Suggestion: identify the true subject ('the kind of person') to choose correct verb form; use plural nouns for general statements and simplify modifiers.

× So, but in generally I'm really just enjoy, uh, in different views.

✓ Generally, I really just enjoy different views.

Third person singular issue and verb form: 'I' requires base form 'enjoy' (present simple) which is correct, but the original had extraneous 'in' and awkward word order 'in generally' and 'really just enjoy, uh, in different views'. Remove 'in' after 'enjoy' and move 'generally' to the front for natural order. Also remove filler sounds. Suggestion: place adverb 'generally' before the verb phrase and do not use preposition after 'enjoy' when followed by a noun phrase.

× Uh, but especially it's more rural areas 'cause I was, uh, in a camp recently and there was an, a rural area.

✓ But especially I prefer rural areas because I was at a camp recently and it was in a rural area.

Article and preposition use: 'it's more rural areas' is ungrammatical—use 'I prefer rural areas' or 'it's more rural' with structure change. Use preposition 'at a camp' rather than 'in a camp' for staying at a camp. 'There was an, a rural area' is awkward; replace with 'it was in a rural area.' Also remove filler. Suggestion: use 'at' for events/locations like a camp and restructure sentences to match subject and verb.

× So I'm just taking picture of the forest of the village.

✓ So I was just taking pictures of the village forest.

Singular/plural: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' when referring to multiple photos. Use past progressive or past simple consistent with 'I was at a camp recently'—'I was just taking pictures' or 'I took pictures.' Also prefer natural noun order: 'village forest' or 'the forest in the village.' Suggestion: match plurality to context and keep tense consistent.

× I will definitely prefer different 1 cause I'm really passionate about my country and of course I'm really passionate about different countries.

✓ I definitely prefer different places because I'm passionate about my country and also about other countries.

Modal/future usage: 'I will definitely prefer' is unnatural for a general preference; use present simple 'I prefer.' Also replace 'different 1' (unclear) with 'different places' and 'of course I'm really passionate about different countries' with 'also about other countries.' Use 'because' instead of informal 'cause.' Suggestion: use present simple for general preferences and avoid contractions like 'cause' in formal speech.

× So I cannot say 1 exactly answer on this question.

✓ So I cannot give an exact answer to this question.

Sentence structure: 'say 1 exactly answer' is ungrammatical. Correct structure is 'give an exact answer' or 'say exactly.' Preposition 'to' is required with 'answer to this question.' Suggestion: use 'give an exact answer to this question' or 'I cannot say exactly.'

× I just can say that I really enjoyed both of that.

✓ I can only say that I really enjoy both of them.

Pronoun and tense: 'both of that' is incorrect—use 'both of them.' Also maintain present tense 'enjoy' if speaking generally about preferences; original used past 'enjoyed' which conflicts with general preference. Word order: 'I can only say' is more natural than 'I just can say.' Suggestion: choose pronoun 'them' for plural items and keep tense consistent with the context (present simple for general truths).