Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid redundant phrases (e.g., "without any doubt" and "I'd love" together), and limit yourself to up to 3–4 sentences. Add one specific detail about what you enjoy photographing to expand the answer logically.

Exemplo: Yes, I love taking pictures of different views. I enjoy photographing city skylines at sunset because the light changes the colours dramatically, and I often post my best shots on my Instagram photography account.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence and then one clear supporting reason using linking words. Correct basic grammar (subject-verb agreement, singular/plural, tenses) and avoid repetition. Keep it to 2–3 sentences with a specific example of a scene you prefer in each setting.

Exemplo: It depends on the scene: I prefer urban views when I'm photographing modern architecture because of the lines and reflections, but I choose rural areas when I want natural landscapes like rolling hills or rivers.

Sugestão: Make your opinion clear and support it with a specific, grammatically correct reason. Avoid vague or negative phrasing like "there is no such beautiful views" — instead say what is different. Use one linking phrase and give one concrete example of a foreign view you like.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes I don't see at home, such as dramatic mountain ranges or historic coastal towns; for example, I loved the colourful cliffside villages I saw during a trip to the Mediterranean.

× Actually I do photography and I have an Instagram page on my social media account and I have so many followers on it.

✓ Actually, I do photography and I have an Instagram page on my social media account, and I have many followers on it.

The original sentence uses 'so many followers' which is informal but acceptable; main issue is redundancy and awkward pronoun reference 'on it' which is unnecessary after 'Instagram page'. Also add commas for clarity. Suggest simplifying to 'many followers' and remove the extra 'on it' or place it directly: 'on Instagram.' Use consistent structure to avoid pronoun vagueness.

× Actually it's depend on the scenic view.

✓ Actually, it depends on the scenic view.

Subject 'it' requires the third person singular verb form 'depends'. Use 'depends' not 'depend'. Add a comma after 'Actually' for natural pause.

× Sometime I prefer to click pictures or capture the view on in the urban areas and sometime go for rural areas as well.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to take pictures or capture the view in urban areas, and sometimes I go to rural areas as well.

Use 'Sometimes' (adverb) and 'take pictures' is the natural collocation rather than 'click pictures'. Remove the extra preposition 'on' before 'in'. Also maintain parallel structure: 'prefer to take... or capture...' and include 'I' in the second clause for clarity. 'Go to rural areas' is the correct prepositional phrase.

× It's so it's totally dependent on the view.

✓ It's totally dependent on the view.

The phrase 'It's so it's' is redundant and ungrammatical. Remove repetition and keep the adverb 'totally' before 'dependent'. The simplified sentence is clearer and grammatically correct.

× To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I can easily compare now in in back home.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I can easily compare them to those back home.

The phrase 'compare now in in back home' is ungrammatical. Use 'compare them to those back home' to indicate comparing views in other countries with views at home. 'Now' is unnecessary. Also correct the double 'in' and improve object reference by using 'them' and 'those'.

× In my back home there is no such beautiful views.

✓ Back home, there are no such beautiful views.

'In my back home' is incorrect; use 'Back home' or 'At home'. 'Views' is plural, so use plural verb 'are' not 'is'. Also remove 'my' before 'back home' or use 'in my hometown' for a different nuance. Adjust article usage: 'no such beautiful views' is acceptable, but better is 'there are no views as beautiful' for style.