Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details (what you photograph and why). Avoid redundancy (e.g. "without any doubt" and "I'd love" together) and reduce irrelevant info about follower count unless it supports your point. Use linking words if you add details.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy photographing different views. I often shoot landscapes and cityscapes because I like capturing light and atmosphere, and I post my best shots on Instagram to get feedback from other photographers.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first and then explain with a clear reason using linking words. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (use correct tense and subject-verb agreement). Be specific about what aspects of urban or rural views attract you.

Exemplo: It depends on the scene, but if I had to choose I'd say both. Urban views appeal to me for their architecture and night lights, while rural views attract me for natural landscapes and peaceful atmospheres, so I decide based on the composition I want to create.

Sugestão: Answer directly and politely, then provide a clear reason with specific details. Avoid negative or absolute statements about your home country; instead, explain personal preference. Correct grammar and repetition errors, and use linking words to connect ideas.

Exemplo: I generally prefer views in other countries because they often offer landscapes and architecture that are new to me. For example, I enjoy photographing historic European streets or dramatic coastal scenery abroad, while my hometown mainly has urban suburbs, so I find foreign scenery more inspiring.

× Actually I do photography and I have an Instagram page on my social media account and I have so many followers on it.

✓ I do photography and have an Instagram page on my social media account, and I have many followers on it.

The sentence has unnecessary repetition of the subject 'I' and an awkward phrase 'so many followers on it.' This is a pronoun/pronoun-reference and style issue; removing the repeated 'I' and simplifying 'so many' to 'many' improves grammar and fluency. Suggestion: combine clauses and avoid repeating the subject when not needed.

× Actually it's depend on the scenic view.

✓ Actually it depends on the scenic view.

This is a subject-verb agreement in the present tense: the singular subject 'it' requires the third-person singular verb form 'depends.' Use 'depends' not 'depend.' Suggestion: for he/she/it use verb+s in the present simple.

× Sometime I prefer to click pictures or capture the view on in the urban areas and sometime go for rural areas as well.

✓ Sometimes I prefer to take pictures or capture the view in urban areas, and sometimes I go to rural areas as well.

Multiple issues: 'Sometime' should be 'Sometimes' (adverb of frequency), 'click pictures' is informal; 'take pictures' is more natural, 'on in the urban areas' is incorrect preposition use and 'go for rural areas' should be 'go to rural areas.' Also the sentence omitted a repeated subject before 'go.' Suggestion: use 'sometimes,' correct prepositions ('in' for areas, 'to' for going), and repeat the subject if needed for clarity.

× It's so it's totally dependent on the view.

✓ So it's totally dependent on the view.

Redundant 'it's so it's' is a repetition error and awkward phrasing. Simplify to 'So it's totally dependent on the view.' This is a present-tense explanatory statement; remove the duplicate 'it's' for clarity. Suggestion: avoid unnecessary repetition.

× To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I can easily compare now in in back home.

✓ To be honest, I prefer views in other countries because I can easily compare them with those back home.

Errors include incorrect pronoun/reference and preposition use: 'compare now in in back home' is ungrammatical. You should compare 'them' (the views) with 'those' (views) back home. Use 'with' for comparison and 'back home' without extra 'in.' Suggestion: use clear pronouns for the thing being compared and the correct preposition 'with.'

× In my back home there is no such beautiful views.

✓ Back home there are no such beautiful views.

Subject-verb agreement and article/word order issue: 'In my back home' is incorrect—use 'Back home.' 'There is no such beautiful views' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'views.' Use 'there are' for plural. Also the phrasing 'no such beautiful views' is acceptable but better as 'no such beautiful views.' Suggestion: match 'there is/are' to the noun number and use 'back home' for location.