Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 発音と流暢さを改善し、冗長な表現を減らして明確な主旨文を作ることが必要です。具体的には、重複（"I like, I like"）を避け、過去や未来の表現は時制と語彙を正しく使って簡潔に述べてください。さらに、“involved memories”のような不自然な語の選択を避け、より適切な単語（例："memories"や"keepsakes"）を使い説明を補強しましょう。練習方法：短い録音を作り、自分の答えの繰り返しや不要語を削って60秒以内に収める練習をしてください。

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I enjoy photographing different views, such as skyscrapers and towers, because they capture moments I can look back on when I’m older. For example, I take photos of cityscapes when I travel so I can remember how places looked.

Sugestão: 発音と語彙の誤り（"rub"はおそらく"live"のミス）を修正し、理由を論理的に整理してください。冒頭で明確な主旨文（"I prefer urban areas."）を述べ、その後に理由を2点以内に絞って具体例を示すと効果的です。また、接続詞（because, so, therefore）を適切に使い文の流れを良くしてください。練習方法：正しい語彙（live, attracted）を意識して、短い理由を2文で述べる練習を繰り返しましょう。

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas. I live in Osaka now and I enjoy the tall skyscrapers and modern architecture. Because I grew up in a rural area, city views feel exciting and different to me.

Sugestão: 論理の一貫性と語彙選択を改善してください。質問は自国と他国のどちらかを尋ねているので、まず明確に立場を示し、その理由を簡潔に述べましょう。現在の答えは"Japanese animations"や"modernity on European cultures"など混乱した表現が含まれるため、具体的な例（都市の建築、歴史的建造物）を用いて説明することを勧めます。また、文法的に正しい形（"I haven't visited the places I want to visit yet"）を練習してください。練習方法：1分以内に立場→理由→具体例の3部分をはっきり分けて話す練習をしてください。

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries. I’m fascinated by different cultures and architecture, and I want to see famous European landmarks and historic streets. I haven’t visited those places yet, so I’m eager to photograph them when I can travel.

× Yes, I like, I like taking a picture in different views like skyscrapers and towers and so on.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different scenes, such as skyscrapers and towers.

The student used repetitive phrasing and singular/plural inconsistency: 'taking a picture in different views' is unnatural. Use present simple correctly for habits and plural 'pictures' and 'scenes' to match 'different'. Suggestions: say 'I like taking pictures of different scenes' to express a habitual action clearly.

× Because when I'm when I'm older, I can look back at this involved memories.

✓ Because when I'm older, I can look back at these vivid memories.

Problems: tense and word choice. Use 'when I'm older' (present continuous for future reference) and 'can look back' is fine, but 'this involved memories' is incorrect: 'this' should be 'these' to match plural 'memories', and 'involved' is wrong word; 'vivid' or 'cherished' fits. Suggestion: use 'these vivid memories.'

× I prefer urban areas because I rub in Osaka now so I often look at the skyscrapers and high buildings so this is so cool.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I live in Osaka now, so I often see skyscrapers and tall buildings; it's very cool.

Errors: 'rub' is likely a mispronunciation of 'live' — replace with 'live'. Preposition 'in Osaka' is correct after 'live'. Use 'see' rather than 'look at' for habitual observation. 'High buildings' is unnatural; use 'tall buildings'. Also combine clauses properly and avoid redundant 'so'. Suggestion: 'I live in Osaka now, so I often see skyscrapers and tall buildings; it's very cool.'

× Umm I am attracted by those buildings be because I came from in rural areas.

✓ I'm attracted to those buildings because I come from a rural area.

Problems: preposition and verb forms. Use 'attracted to' (not 'attracted by' in this context). 'Be because' is incorrect — remove extra 'be'. 'I came from in rural areas' mixes past and preposition; use present 'I come from a rural area' or past 'I came from a rural area' depending on meaning. Suggestion: 'I'm attracted to those buildings because I come from a rural area.'

× I prefer the views in different countries because I am fascinated by Japanese animations and these animations are often modernity on European cultures and histories so.

✓ I prefer views in different countries because I am fascinated by Japanese animation, and it often modernizes or reinterprets European cultures and histories.

Problems: article and noun form ('Japanese animations' -> 'Japanese animation' as a general concept), awkward phrase 'are often modernity on' — use 'often modernize or reinterpret'. Maintain present tense for general truths. Suggestion: 'I prefer views in different countries because I am fascinated by Japanese animation, which often modernizes or reinterprets European cultures and histories.'

× As I haven't visited places I wanted.

✓ I haven't visited some places I want to visit yet.

Fragment: original is a sentence fragment lacking clear structure. Use present perfect 'I haven't visited' with object and infinitive 'I want to visit'. Add 'yet' to indicate expectation. Suggestion: 'I haven't visited some places I want to visit yet.'