Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and confident. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Avoid hesitations and repetition. Also correct collocations: say 'take pictures of different views' and 'a good atmospheric photo' or 'a photo that captures the atmosphere.'

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I especially enjoy photographing landscapes because I like capturing the atmosphere and mood of a place. For example, I try to shoot at sunrise or sunset to get warm light and soft shadows, which often makes the scene more atmospheric.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference or a balanced answer with structured reasons. Use linking words (however, although, also) and specific vocabulary (countryside, greenery, skyline, vibrant colours). Correct grammar: 'the countryside has lots of greenery' and 'cities have bright colours.' Keep to two to three sentences.

Exemplo: I generally prefer rural views because the countryside has a lot of greenery and peaceful scenery, which I find relaxing. However, I also enjoy urban views sometimes because city skylines and vibrant colours can feel exciting and dynamic.

Sugestão: Be concise and avoid vague phrases. Start with a clear statement of preference, then give specific examples and correct word choice (e.g. 'spectacular views', 'largest beaches', 'tranquil, green landscapes'). Use linking words like 'because' and keep sentences natural and grammatically correct.

Exemplo: Overall, I prefer views in my own country because it offers a variety of spectacular landscapes. For instance, we have some of the longest sandy beaches in the world and many tranquil, green areas that are perfect for nature photography.

× More or less I would say yes. I I enjoy it when I take a good picture of atmosphere.

✓ More or less, I would say yes. I enjoy taking good pictures of the atmosphere.

The original contains repetition ('I I') and awkward phrasing. 'Enjoy it when I take a good picture of atmosphere' has incorrect verb form and missing articles. Use the gerund 'enjoy taking' after 'enjoy', plural 'pictures' for general activity, and add the definite article 'the' before 'atmosphere'. Also add a comma after 'More or less' for clarity. Suggestion: Remove duplicate words, use 'enjoy' + gerund, and include appropriate articles.

× It depends, I would say the countryside cause countryside have a quite good green sea nature rather than the urban areas and sometimes urban areas also good and I like the bright and color of city.

✓ It depends. I would say the countryside, because the countryside has quite a lot of green and sea scenery rather than urban areas. Sometimes urban areas are also nice, and I like the bright colors of the city.

Multiple issues: run-on sentence and incorrect conjunction 'cause' (informal) and missing articles and subject-verb agreement ('countryside have' should be 'countryside has'). 'Quite a good green sea nature' is ungrammatical; replace with 'quite a lot of green and sea scenery' or 'a lot of greenery and seaside scenery'. Ensure verbs agree with singular noun 'countryside' and use 'because' as a conjunction. Use plural 'colors' and article 'the city'. Suggestion: Break into shorter sentences, use 'because', ensure subject-verb agreement, and choose clearer nouns.

× By or large, I prefer my country 'cause my country has such a lot of views, specular views such an such as we have the largest sea beach all over the world and our country's views is all known for our quiet greenishy of nature.

✓ By and large, I prefer my country because it has so many spectacular sights, such as the largest beaches in the world, and our country's views are known for their peaceful greenery.

Problems: incorrect phrase 'By or large' should be 'By and large'. Informal 'cause' should be 'because'. 'Such a lot of views' is awkward; use 'so many spectacular sights'. 'Specular' is misspelled; use 'spectacular'. 'Such an such as' is incorrect; use 'such as'. 'The largest sea beach' should be 'the largest beaches' or 'the largest beach', depending on meaning; plural likely. 'Our country's views is' has subject-verb disagreement; 'views' requires 'are'. 'Greenishy' is nonstandard; use 'greenery' or 'green landscape', and 'quiet' better as 'peaceful'. Also replace repeated 'my country' with pronoun 'it' for concision. Suggestion: Use standard connectors ('by and large', 'because'), correct spelling, ensure subject-verb agreement, and use natural nouns like 'sights', 'beaches', and 'greenery'.