Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and relevant, but it is slightly long and has minor grammatical issues and redundancy. To improve, make one clear topic sentence, correct verb agreement ("the time when I take the most pictures is"), avoid repeated words ("just love to take pictures" twice), and add one specific detail with a linking word. Aim for 2–4 sentences and use varied vocabulary (e.g., "landscapes," "scenery").

Exemplo: I really enjoy photographing different landscapes. I take the most pictures when I’m on holiday with family or friends; for example, in Banff I capture mountain panoramas, and in Penticton I focus on lakeside sunsets.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains filler words ("umm," "like"), a grammatical error ("much more prettier"), and informal phrases. To improve, remove fillers, correct comparative forms ("much prettier" or "more beautiful"), and give a brief reason with a linking word (e.g., "because"). Keep it concise and use precise vocabulary such as "skylines" or "natural landscapes."

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the natural landscapes are generally prettier than urban skylines. For instance, I find mountains and forests more calming and visually interesting than tall buildings.

Sugestão: Your response answers the question but is repetitive and contains a small repetition error ("to to"). To improve, state your position once with a reason and add a short example or contrast using a linking word (e.g., "because" or "however"). Use varied adjectives (e.g., "unique," "distinctive") to sound more fluent.

Exemplo: I enjoy views both at home and abroad because every country offers unique scenery; for example, I love local coastal landscapes, but I also appreciate the dramatic mountains I’ve seen in Canada.

× The time when I actually take the most pictures are when we're on holiday with either family or friends and I just love to take pictures of the different scenery we're at, especially when we're in Banff at the mountains or when we're in Penticton close to the.

✓ The time when I actually take the most pictures is when we're on holiday with either family or friends, and I just love to take pictures of the different scenery we're in, especially when we're in Banff in the mountains or when we're in Penticton nearby.

The subject 'The time' is singular, so the verb must be 'is' not 'are' (subject-verb agreement). Also cleaned up preposition and phrase choices: use 'in' for being within scenery or a location (Banff in the mountains, Penticton nearby) and add a comma before 'and' to join two independent clauses. Suggestion: identify the main subject and ensure the verb matches singular/plural; prefer 'in' for locations and 'nearby' or 'close to' followed by a noun (e.g., 'close to the lake').

× I would say I prefer views in umm rural areas as the scenery is usually much more prettier than in urban areas.

✓ I would say I prefer views in rural areas, as the scenery is usually much prettier than in urban areas.

'More prettier' is incorrect because 'prettier' is already the comparative form; adding 'more' is redundant. Also remove filler 'umm' and add a comma before the reason clause. Suggestion: use either 'prettier' or 'more beautiful', not both; avoid filler words in formal answers.

× I'm not a big fan of like skyscrapers UMM but rather of like mountains and natural beauty.

✓ I'm not a big fan of skyscrapers but prefer mountains and natural beauty.

Remove unnecessary filler words 'like' and 'UMM' and fix preposition/structure: 'a big fan of skyscrapers' is correct; use 'prefer' to contrast with 'but'. Suggestion: avoid fillers and repeated 'like'; use concise contrast structures (e.g., 'I'm not a big fan of X but prefer Y').

× I think every country has its own scenery that is pretty and absolutely stunning to to view.

✓ I think every country has its own scenery that is pretty and absolutely stunning to view.

The word 'to' is repeated ('to to'), which is a simple typographical/repetition error and breaks fluency. Also 'scenery that is pretty and absolutely stunning to view' is fine; could be tightened to 'scenery that is beautiful and absolutely stunning.' Suggestion: read sentences aloud to catch repeated words and prefer concise adjective choices.