Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail using a linking phrase. Avoid filler phrases like "something like that."

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph flower-filled gardens against blue skies because the colours and light create a peaceful, attractive scene.

Sugestão: Improve grammar (singular/plural, verb agreement) and be specific. Use a clear topic sentence, then give one or two precise reasons linked with connectors like "because" or "for example." Avoid incorrect words (e.g. "seedy").

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the architecture is spectacular. For example, in Kuala Lumpur I like photographing towering towers and modern glass buildings, which create interesting shapes and reflections.

Sugestão: Make sentences grammatically correct and more specific. Give a clear topic sentence, then use linking words such as "because" and offer concrete contrasts or examples. Replace vague words like "petals" with clearer descriptions.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they are varied and familiar. For instance, you can find peaceful rural landscapes with rice fields and colourful flowers, while cities have tall, modern buildings and lively streets.

× Yes sure, I like taking pictures in of different views because I love the scenario that have many flowers and blue skies and something like that.

✓ Yes, sure. I like taking pictures of different views because I love scenes that have many flowers and blue skies and things like that.

Problems: incorrect preposition 'in of' and wrong noun choice 'scenario' and subject-verb agreement 'that have' with plural noun; also 'something like that' is informal. Corrections: use the correct preposition 'of' with 'taking pictures of'. Use 'scenes' (countable and plural) instead of 'scenario' to match meaning, so use 'scenes that have' which agrees with plural. Replace 'something like that' with 'things like that' for naturalness. Suggestion: pay attention to prepositions with fixed verbs and ensure noun number matches verb.

× Mostly I prefer views in urban area because the buildings in urban area is too spectacular and in Malaysia we most of the time will take the picture in Kuala Lumpur because they are very seedy and there's a lot of buildings, huge buildings like Kuala Lumpur.

✓ Mostly I prefer views in urban areas because the buildings in urban areas are very spectacular, and in Malaysia we usually take pictures in Kuala Lumpur because there are many large buildings, such as those in Kuala Lumpur.

Problems: 'urban area' should be plural 'urban areas' when speaking generally; definite/zero article issues and subject-verb agreement 'buildings ... is' should be 'are'. 'Most of the time will take the picture' is awkward—use 'usually take pictures'. 'They are very seedy' is likely wrong word choice ('seedy' means run-down); use 'many' or 'large' and specify 'many large buildings'. Corrections: pluralize nouns when speaking generally, ensure verb agrees with plural subject, use natural adverb 'usually', and avoid incorrect word 'seedy'. Suggestion: check plurality and choose appropriate adjectives; match verbs to subjects.

× I prefer views in my own countries. The reason is the view in my country is is beautiful and have a lot of difference. Like in some rural areas we have petals and in city we have the long buildings.

✓ I prefer views in my own country. The reason is that the scenery in my country is beautiful and has a lot of variety. For example, in some rural areas we have fields of flowers, and in the city we have tall buildings.

Problems: 'countries' should be singular 'country' when referring to the speaker's own nation. Duplicate 'is is'. 'The view... have' mixes singular subject with plural verb; use 'scenery... is' or 'views... have'. 'A lot of difference' is incorrect—use 'a lot of variety'. 'Petals' is the wrong noun for fields of flowers. 'The long buildings' is unnatural; use 'tall buildings'. Corrections: use singular 'country', fix verb agreement, replace unclear nouns with natural collocations ('scenery', 'fields of flowers', 'tall buildings'). Suggestion: ensure subject and verb agree in number and choose natural collocations for descriptions.