Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is relevant and gives personal background, but it is too long, slightly repetitive and has some grammatical issues. Try to open with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words, and finish concisely. Pay attention to verb forms and sentence boundaries to avoid run-on sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets and green parks because they create calm memories I can revisit later. Also, I like to enjoy the scene in person before I take a photo, so I both remember it and capture it for the future.

Sugestão: Good direct answer and clear reasons. To improve, use more concise phrasing, avoid repetition (e.g. "a lot" repeated), and correct small grammar mistakes (subject-verb agreement and redundant pronouns). Use one linking word to contrast urban areas.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas because they offer more natural scenery: wildlife, wide green spaces and clear open skies. In contrast, urban areas tend to be crowded and noisy, with many buildings, so they are less appealing to me.

Sugestão: You answered directly and showed flexibility, but the response includes awkward phrasing and repetition. Improve by making one clear opening sentence, then give two specific examples and a brief reason. Use precise vocabulary (e.g. "coastlines," "landscapes," "green spaces") and correct articles and plurality.

Exemplo: I enjoy views both in my country and abroad. For instance, at home I can visit coastlines and varied landscapes, while other countries offer different cultural scenery. Therefore I'm happy to explore either, because such places help me relax.

× So whenever I come across a beautiful sunset or an astonishing greenery space and make sure that I take photos and also enjoy the scene myself live and the reason why I take photos to reserve memories to get back to it and remember what happens.

✓ So whenever I come across a beautiful sunset or an astonishing green space, I make sure that I take photos and also enjoy the scene myself live, because I take photos to preserve memories so I can return to them and remember what happened.

Run-on sentence and incorrect verb forms: 'make sure that I take photos and also enjoy' needed clearer structure; 'greenery space' is unidiomatic—use 'green space'; 'reserve memories' is incorrect verb choice—use 'preserve memories'; 'to get back to it and remember what happens' mixes tenses and pronouns; changed to 'so I can return to them and remember what happened' to match past reference. Split into clearer clauses and adjusted verb forms for correctness and coherence. Grammar problem type ID:10

× My country has a lot of different and varieties of scenes and location like coastline, landscape, greenery spaces and other countries as well.

✓ My country has a lot of different kinds of scenery and locations, like coastlines, landscapes, and green spaces, and other countries do too.

Word choice and adjective use: 'different and varieties of scenes' is ungrammatical; use 'different kinds of scenery' or 'a variety of scenes'; 'location' should be plural 'locations'; 'greenery spaces' should be 'green spaces'; added 'do too' to express other countries similarly. Adjusted noun forms and adjective placement for natural English. Grammar problem type ID:13

× But in urban areas they have usually a lot of buildings and it's it are often noisy and crowded and it's they are not my favorite places.

✓ But urban areas usually have a lot of buildings, and they are often noisy and crowded, so they are not my favorite places.

Multiple agreement and redundancy issues: 'they have usually a lot' should be 'urban areas usually have a lot'; phrases like 'it's it are' and 'it's they are' are incorrect and redundant. Use consistent subject 'they' to refer to 'urban areas' and adjust verb 'have'/'are' for agreement and clarity. Grammar problem type ID:1

× In fact, I've been into photography as a hobby since I was a child.

✓ In fact, I've been into photography as a hobby since I was a child.

No grammatical correction needed; sentence correctly uses present perfect continuous idea 'I've been into' with 'since'. Included to indicate that the sentence was checked and is correct. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I enjoy scenes both at home and abroad as well.

✓ I enjoy scenes both at home and abroad.

Redundant adverb: 'as well' is unnecessary after 'both'; sentence is otherwise correct. Removed redundant phrase for conciseness while preserving meaning. Grammar problem type ID:8

× So I am flexible to explore these places whether it's in my country or other countries because they make me very calm and relaxed.

✓ So I am happy to explore these places whether they are in my country or in other countries, because they make me feel calm and relaxed.

Preposition and pronoun issues: 'flexible to explore' is unidiomatic—'happy to explore' or 'willing to explore' is better; 'whether it's in my country or other countries' should use plural agreement 'they are' and parallel prepositions 'in my country or in other countries'; 'make me very calm and relaxed' is acceptable but 'make me feel calm and relaxed' is more natural. Grammar problem type ID:11}]}}<!--end-->