Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: 句子有语法错误（如动词形式和重复词），表述不够简洁，细节不够具体。回答时先给出明确的主题句，然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持，用连接词使逻辑更清楚。注意动词时态和单复数，避免重复词汇，并把“familiar supports”改为更合适的表达（如“familiar places”）。

Exemplo: I don't usually take photos of views because I've grown up seeing many of them in my hometown. Instead, I prefer to enjoy the moment; for example, when I visit familiar places I focus on exercising rather than taking pictures.

Sugestão: 表意基本清楚，但有语法问题（lay → lie），口头语过多，细节描述有误（应该是‘clouds’或‘leaves’，‘clothes’不合适）。建议先给出直接回答，再用一到两条具体原因支持，使用连词（for example, because）并减少填充词。

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the countryside is peaceful and relaxing. For example, I like lying on the grass and watching the clouds drift by, which helps me unwind and reduces stress from my studies.

Sugestão: 回答直接但语法有小错误（it's always attracts → it always attracts / it always fascinates me），内容可以更具体说明为什么国内景色吸引你（文化、familiarity, food）。建议先回答偏好，然后给出一两个具体理由或例子，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with the culture and scenery. For example, visiting different cities in China always fascinates me since I enjoy the local architecture and cuisine, which makes the experience more memorable.

× I don't often taking pictures of of different views because I've already seen many of them in my hometown, so I prefer to simply enjoy the moment.

✓ I don't often take pictures of different views because I've already seen many of them in my hometown, so I prefer to simply enjoy the moment.

句中應使用不定式（take）而不是動名詞（taking）在否定副詞 often 後跟動詞時，正確形式是基礎動詞。另有一個重複的 "of of"，需要刪除。建議：在類似結構中，主語 + don't/doesn't + 動詞原形。

× For example, when I visit familiar supports, I focus on the exercise rather than take photos.

✓ For example, when I visit familiar spots, I focus on the experience rather than take photos.

原句中的 "supports" 用錯詞，應為 "spots"（地點/景點）或其他語境合適詞；此外原意更貼近 "experience"（體驗）而非 "exercise"（練習/運動）。建議：檢查單詞拼寫和語義，確保與上下文一致。

× Well, actually I prefer rural areas because in the countryside we can just lay on the grass and watch the clothes slowly drift by.

✓ Well, actually I prefer rural areas because in the countryside we can just lie on the grass and watch the clouds slowly drift by.

動詞 "lay" 和 "lie" 用法不同：躺應用不及物動詞 lie；lay 是及物動詞需帶賓語。句中 "clothes"（衣服）顯然應為 "clouds"（雲）。建議：復習 lie/lay 的區別，並注意常見近音詞（homophones）。

× Umm, which makes me feel very calm and uh, it can release my stress on my major.

✓ Umm, which makes me feel very calm and, uh, it can relieve my stress about my major.

使用不當："release my stress on my major" 表達不自然。應用動詞 "relieve" 表示緩解壓力，介詞用法為 "relieve stress about/on" 其中 "about my major" 更自然。建議：常用搭配是 "relieve/ reduce stress about/ from"。

× To be honest, I don't have much knowledge about the views of other countries, so when I visit a city in China and see the local scenery, it's always attracts me very much.

✓ To be honest, I don't have much knowledge about the views of other countries, so when I visit a city in China and see the local scenery, it always attracts me very much.

主語 "it" 與動詞 "attracts" 應符合主謂結構。原句中多了助動詞 "is"（it's always attracts）導致動詞重複錯誤。正確為 "it always attracts"。建議：避免在主語 + 動詞 前不必要地加入 is/are，檢查是否需要被動或進行時。