Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitation and filler words, make a clear topic sentence, and add one or two specific details using linking words. Keep the response concise (no more than 4–5 sentences). Pronunciation of some words (e.g. "pictures", "scenery") could be clearer. Try to use varied vocabulary such as "landscapes", "vistas", or "scenic spots".

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views when I travel. For example, I often photograph coastal landscapes and mountain vistas because the changing light makes them dramatic. I usually focus on composition and try to capture the mood of the place.

Sugestão: Clarify vocabulary (use 'rural' not 'ruble'), remove repetition, and form a clear topic sentence stating preference. Use linking words (for example, 'because' and 'so') and specific details to explain why you prefer rural views. Keep sentences short and avoid long pauses and repetitions.

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the scenery is more peaceful and varied. For instance, I enjoy walking through misty forests and looking at distant mountains, which helps me relax and feel connected to local traditions.

Sugestão: Start with a direct topic sentence and reduce hesitations. Use linking words like 'because' and 'for example' and provide one or two specific examples of places. Try to vary vocabulary (e.g. 'coastlines', 'ancient temples', 'heritage sites') and avoid repeating phrases like 'throughout the country.'

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because we have diverse landscapes and rich heritage. For example, there are scenic beaches on the coast and ancient temples inland, so I often visit different regions to photograph both natural and historical sites.

× Yes, I do like, uh, capturing pictures in different views while traveling.

✓ Yes, I do like capturing pictures of different views while traveling.

Use 'capture pictures of' rather than 'capturing pictures in' to collocate with 'views'. Also remove unnecessary comma after 'like'. The gerund 'capturing' is correct here, but the preposition must be 'of'. Improve fluidity by removing filler sounds.

× Uh, especially when I'm into, uh, when I'm in, when I'm traveling to some new place, uh, I love the nature and I always love to capture beautiful, uh, scenery and picturesque, uh, moments.

✓ Especially when I'm traveling to a new place, I love nature and I always like to capture beautiful scenery and picturesque moments.

Simplify the clause to 'when I'm traveling to a new place'. 'Love the nature' is incorrect: 'nature' as an uncountable noun typically takes no article ('love nature'). Use consistent verbs: 'always like to capture' or 'always love capturing'. Remove extra fillers and commas. Present participles were fine but sentence structure was wordy.

× To be honest, I I prefer ruble areas than urban areas because the views are breathtaking allow allow seeing white forests and the distant mountains where the the the quite MO atmosphere makes me feel relaxed and and also the tradition.

✓ To be honest, I prefer rural areas to urban areas because the views are breathtaking; you can see white forests and distant mountains, and the quiet, calm atmosphere makes me feel relaxed and connected to tradition.

Multiple problems: 'ruble' is a misspelling of 'rural' (adjective). Use 'prefer X to Y' not 'prefer X than Y' (incorrect conjunction). 'Allow allow seeing' is ungrammatical; use 'you can see' or 'allow you to see'. Remove repeated words. 'the quiet calm atmosphere' uses adjectives: place in correct order and add a comma between coordinate adjectives. Clarify 'the tradition' to 'connected to tradition'.

× Well, I would prefer the views from my country because it's, it's very beautiful country.

✓ Well, I would prefer the views from my country because it's a very beautiful country.

When referring to a singular countable noun like 'country' with a describing clause, use the indefinite article 'a' ('a very beautiful country').

× Uh, we see, you see a lot of, uh, mountains, uh, beaches and also, uh, many historical places throughout, uh, throughout the country.

✓ We see a lot of mountains, beaches, and many historical places throughout the country.

Remove filler words and repeated 'throughout'. The preposition 'throughout' is correct but should appear once. Also parallel list items should not have extra commas or filler.

× And, and I've lived all my life, uh, exploring new places like temples and also other, uh, tourist places.

✓ I've spent my whole life exploring new places like temples and other tourist attractions.

Use 'I've spent my whole life' or 'I've lived my whole life'—'lived all my life exploring' is acceptable but 'spent' is clearer. 'Tourist places' is better phrased as 'tourist attractions'. Remove repeated 'and' and fillers. Present participle 'exploring' is correct but structure benefits from smoothing.