Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, correct grammar, and avoid repetition. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Correct verb forms (e.g., 'taking pictures' not 'to taking') and remove filler sounds (umm, I).

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy taking pictures of different scenery. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach because they create vivid colors, and these photos help me preserve special moments with my family.

Sugestão: Clarify and link ideas more smoothly, correct unclear phrases, and keep responses within 3–4 sentences. Use linking words (for example, however) properly and provide a specific reason or example for each preference.

Exemplo: I usually prefer urban views because I enjoy photographing the city skyline at night, with its lights and reflections on the river. However, when I want to relax I prefer the peaceful countryside, for example, wide open fields and gentle hills which make calming landscape photos.

Sugestão: Organize your answer with a clear topic sentence and complete thoughts. Remove fillers and finish your sentence. Give a specific comparison (e.g., types of scenes at home vs abroad) and a reason. Use correct vocabulary and avoid fragmentary endings.

Exemplo: I prefer taking photos in my own country because it has many beautiful coastal towns and unique cultural festivals that I know well. However, I also enjoy photographing abroad occasionally since different countries offer new architecture and landscapes that inspire me.

× I love I love to taking picture it's help it allows me to freeze special moment for me.

✓ I love taking pictures; it helps me freeze special moments.

The phrase 'to taking' is incorrect because after 'love' we use either 'to' + base verb or verb+ -ing, not both. Use 'love taking' (verb + -ing). 'Picture' should be plural for general photos (singular/plural issue), and 'it's help' is incorrect: use 'it helps' for third person singular. Combine into two clauses with correct verb forms and plural nouns. Suggestion: Use 'love taking' and ensure subject-verb agreement ('it helps') and plural nouns for generality ('pictures', 'moments').

× it's help it allows me to freeze special moment for me.

✓ it helps and allows me to freeze special moments for me.

'It's' (it is) followed by 'help' is incorrect because the verb must agree with the third person singular subject: use 'helps'. Also 'special moment' should be plural when speaking generally. Suggestion: match verb form to subject and use plural nouns when referring to multiple occurrences.

× the like and the reflections. Great dramatic skins.

✓ the lights and the reflections. Great dramatic skies.

'Like' is a misspelling of 'lights'. 'Skins' is a misspelling of 'skies'. These are lexical errors (incorrect word choice). Suggestion: proofread for similar-sounding words and choose the correct noun for the context ('lights', 'skies').

× I usually prefer urban views because I love photographing the city skyline at night, the like and the reflections.

✓ I usually prefer urban views because I love photographing the city skyline at night, the lights and the reflections.

The main structure is fine, but 'the like' is incorrect and should be 'the lights'. 'Photographing' correctly uses the -ing form after 'love'. Suggestion: fix the typo and keep the -ing form as used.

× However, sometimes I enjoy the peaceful countryside for calm landscape photos when I need to relax.

✓ However, sometimes I enjoy the peaceful countryside for calm landscape photos when I want to relax.

'Need to relax' is not wrong, but 'want to relax' fits better with the habitual preference context. The original is acceptable; suggestion: use 'want' for preference statements. No structural change required.

× Well, I love umm, this Canary in my country.

✓ Well, I love the Canary Islands in my country.

'This Canary' is incorrect. The place name likely refers to the Canary Islands, which requires the definite article 'the' and plural form. Suggestion: use the correct place name and include the article when needed ('the Canary Islands').

× Uh, there are a lot of a beautiful a beautiful place to take the photos.

✓ There are a lot of beautiful places to take photos.

'a lot of a beautiful a beautiful place' is ungrammatical repetition and mixes singular/plural and article usage. After 'a lot of' use a plural noun without an article: 'a lot of beautiful places'. Also 'take the photos' implies specific photos; use 'take photos' for general meaning. Suggestion: simplify to 'a lot of beautiful places to take photos.'

× Umm, However, I I I believe that the other com.

✓ However, I believe that other countries are also beautiful.

The original sentence is fragmented and incomplete ('the other com' unclear). This is a sentence structure and omission error. Suggestion: complete the thought by specifying 'other countries' and use a full clause; remove repeated fillers.