Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, avoid filler words (umm, uh), correct grammar (use gerunds and prepositions correctly), and add one specific example. Keep answers within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photos help preserve travel memories. For example, when I photographed the coastal sunset on my last trip, looking at the photo later instantly brought back the sound of the waves and the warm colors of the sky.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and coherence: use correct comparison structure (prefer X to Y), fix subject-verb agreement, remove repetition, and complete the supporting detail with a linking word. Provide a specific reason and finish the sentence properly within 2–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas to those in rural areas because I enjoy city life. Cities offer better public transport and more job opportunities, so it’s easier to meet people and join social activities.

Sugestão: Give a direct, grammatical response: start with a clear stance (I like both / I prefer...), avoid vague phrases and fillers, and use correct verb forms. Add one specific comparison or reason to support your view and keep it concise.

Exemplo: I like views in both my country and other countries because each offers unique features. For instance, local landscapes are familiar and comforting, while foreign scenery often introduces new cultures and architecture that I find exciting.

× I do enjoy the moments of photographing because they can keep the memories we spend on a trip.

✓ I do enjoy photographing moments because they can preserve the memories we make on a trip.

The phrase 'the moments of photographing' is awkward; use the verb in present participle 'photographing' directly with the object 'moments'. Also 'keep the memories we spend on a trip' is incorrect: 'spend' is not used with 'memories' and 'keep' is less natural than 'preserve'. Use 'make' for creating memories. Suggestion: use concise noun phrase 'photographing moments' and replace 'keep' with 'preserve' and 'spend' with 'make' to convey meaning clearly.

× For example, umm, when you photograph the moment on in a trip, you can quickly recall the memories, uh, at the time.

✓ For example, when you photograph a moment on a trip, you can quickly recall the memories at that time.

Errors include 'the moment on in a trip' which has extra preposition 'on' and wrong article use. Change to 'a moment on a trip' or better 'a moment on a trip' -> 'a moment on a trip' simplified to 'a moment on a trip' and then 'at the time' -> 'at that time' for clarity. Also remove filler words. Ensure present participle 'photograph' use is correct as simple present 'photograph' for general truth.

× Cities offers more more things like public transport and diverse jobs, opportunity and a better social lives.

✓ Cities offer more things, like public transport, diverse job opportunities, and better social life.

Subject 'Cities' is plural so the verb must be plural 'offer' not 'offers'. Also duplicate 'more' removed, 'diverse jobs, opportunity' should be 'diverse job opportunities', and 'a better social lives' mixes singular article with plural noun; change to 'better social life' or 'better social lives'. Suggestions: match verb to plural subject and make noun phrases parallel and consistent.

× For example, I can easily meet some new friends and.

✓ For example, I can easily meet new friends.

Sentence ends with conjunction 'and' with no following clause, creating an incomplete sentence. Remove the trailing 'and' and keep the sentence concise. Suggestion: complete the thought if another idea follows, e.g., 'I can easily meet new friends and join social activities.'

× I wouldn't choose any of ones because I think both of them are having some kind of great views.

✓ I wouldn't choose either one because I think both have great views.

'Any of ones' is incorrect; use 'either one' when choosing between two. 'Both of them are having' misuses progressive aspect and 'having some kind of great views' is awkward quantifier use. Use simple present 'have' for general truth and 'great views' without 'some kind of'. Suggestion: use 'either' for two choices and simple present tense 'have'.

× I think umm those kind of views will having me.

✓ I think those kinds of views will attract me.

'Will having me' is ungrammatical: modal/future 'will' requires base verb 'have' not 'having', but intended meaning is likely 'attract me'. Also 'those kind of' should be 'those kinds of' (number agreement) or 'that kind of'. Suggestion: use correct verb form after 'will' and choose appropriate verb ('attract') to express interest; correct plural agreement 'those kinds of'.