Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is natural and directly answers the question, but it is slightly informal and could be more specific. Keep responses concise (max 5 sentences) and add one clear supporting detail using a linking word. Also avoid filler phrases like “for sure” in formal testing. Try to vary vocabulary (e.g. “photograph” instead of “take pictures”) and explain briefly why you enjoy it.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me preserve memories. For example, when I travel I often take landscape photos to remember the place and the mood. This practice also improves my observation skills and creativity.

Sugestão: Your answer is direct but too brief. Expand with one or two supporting reasons linked logically. Use linking words like “because” or “because of” and add specific details about what appeals to you in urban views (e.g., architecture, lights, activity). Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I enjoy the architecture and the city atmosphere. For instance, I like photographing modern buildings, busy streets and nighttime lights, which create interesting contrasts and patterns.

Sugestão: The meaning is clear but the answer needs clearer structure, accurate word choice, and specific examples. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific supporting details using linking words (e.g., “because” and “for example”). Correct place names and phrases, and avoid sentence fragments. Pronounce and spell place names correctly if possible.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Pakistan’s northern areas offer spectacular scenery. For example, places like Malam Jabba and Swat have snow-capped mountains and forests, which are perfect for landscape photography.

× As a Pakistani I prefer my country always the north sides because there are many beautiful views like. Snowfalls Marikeshu Swath Honda.

✓ As a Pakistani, I always prefer the northern areas of my country because there are many beautiful views, such as Snowfalls, Marikeshu, Swat, and Honda.

Multiple issues apply but per instructions only fix those matching the provided list: this sentence contains incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs (ID 13) and article/word order problems. 'always' is placed incorrectly; it should come before the main verb 'prefer' for natural word order: 'I always prefer'. 'north sides' is not a natural adjective phrase for regions; use 'northern areas'. Also add a comma after the introductory phrase and use 'such as' to introduce examples. Proper nouns (place names) should be separated by commas and capitalized. These changes improve grammatical correctness and clarity. Suggestion: place adverbs (like 'always') before the verb, use correct adjective forms (northern), and connect examples with 'such as' or 'like' followed by a clear list.