Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and confident. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid fillers (e.g., "umm", repeated words), and give one brief supporting reason with a simple example. Use linking words to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "for example").

Exemplo: I prefer to live in the moment rather than take many photos because photos can distract me from enjoying an experience. For example, when I visit a concert I focus on the music and the atmosphere instead of taking pictures.

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity, and provide more specific, accurate details. Use a clear topic sentence, correct noun/verb agreement, and one coherent example. Link reasons with words like "because" and "for instance."

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because the wide open spaces and natural scenery help me relax. For instance, I enjoy watching rolling hills and the distant horizon at sunset, which makes me feel calm and refreshed.

Sugestão: Make the answer more fluent and specific. Begin with a clear statement, avoid repetition, and give a concise reason and a specific detail (e.g., a particular place or feeling). Use linking words such as "because" or "so" to join ideas.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because they often include the sea, which I find very meaningful. For example, watching the sunrise over the bay in my hometown always makes me feel peaceful and connected to my roots.

× I prefer living the moment.

✓ I prefer living in the moment.

Missing preposition 'in' before 'the moment' is a fixed expression; 'living the moment' is incorrect. Use 'living in the moment' to mean fully experiencing the present. Suggestion: Remember common collocations; 'live in the moment' is the standard phrase.

× It's it's for the best to just live the moment and see it by yourself and have memories.

✓ It's best to just live in the moment, see it for yourself, and make memories.

Redundant 'it's it's' is a repetition error and 'for the best' is unnecessary here; also missing 'in' in 'live in the moment' and awkward sequence 'see it by yourself' should be 'see it for yourself'. Suggestion: Remove duplicate words, use 'best' without 'for' here, include 'in', and reorder phrases for natural English.

× see it by yourself and have memories.

✓ see it for yourself and create memories.

'By yourself' implies being alone rather than personally experiencing something; 'for yourself' is the correct idiom for personal experience. 'Have memories' is grammatical but 'create memories' is more natural. Suggestion: Use 'for yourself' to express personal experience and prefer 'create memories'.

× I prefer views in rural areas because the open space are natural.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because the open spaces are natural.

Subject 'open space' should be plural 'open spaces' to match 'areas' and verb agreement; article 'the' can remain if referring to specific spaces, but plural noun requires plural form. Suggestion: Make noun plural to agree with context and verb.

× the open space are natural.

✓ the open spaces are natural.

'open space' singular does not agree with plural verb 'are'. Either use singular verb ('is') with singular noun or plural noun with 'are'. Suggestion: Match noun number with verb: 'open spaces are' or 'open space is'.

× Sun helped me relax and calm my mind.

✓ The sun helps me relax and calms my mind.

Context is general preference, so use present simple. Also 'sun' needs the definite article 'the' and verb should agree with third person singular ('helps' and 'calms'). Suggestion: Use present simple for habitual statements and include 'the' before 'sun'.

× For example, I enjoy watching rolling floods and distance.

✓ For example, I enjoy watching rolling fields in the distance.

'floods' is likely a mischoice for 'fields'; 'distance' needs a prepositional phrase 'in the distance' to be grammatical. Suggestion: Use correct noun 'fields' and include 'in the' before 'distance'.

× I actually prefer in my country.

✓ I actually prefer it in my country.

The verb 'prefer' normally takes an object; 'prefer in my country' is incomplete. Adding 'it' (referring to 'views') makes the sentence grammatical. Suggestion: Include the object pronoun or restate 'I actually prefer the views in my country.'

× I really like the view in my country because it's mostly sea and I like to see the sea view.

✓ I really like the views in my country because there is mostly sea, and I like to see the sea.

'the view' and 'the sea view' are repetitive; use plural 'views' or rephrase. Also use 'there is' to describe existence of sea; 'mostly sea' needs 'there is' or 'it is mostly sea'. Suggestion: Avoid repetition by saying 'I like the views... because there is mostly sea' and simply 'I like to see the sea.'

× It's really meaningful to me actually.

✓ It's actually really meaningful to me.

Word order is not strictly ungrammatical but placing 'actually' earlier sounds more natural. Suggestion: Place adverbs like 'actually' before 'really' for smoother phrasing.