Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is enthusiastic and relevant, but improve accuracy, grammar and clarity. Keep sentences natural (max 5), use a clear topic sentence, and avoid filler words. Replace incorrect words (e.g., 'enjoyed too', 'escapes', 'spew') with correct choices like 'enjoy photographing landscapes and cityscapes'. Make supporting details specific and connected using linking words (for example: 'for example' or 'so'). Практиканы ұсыныңыз: жауапты баяндап жатпай, қысқа және түсінікті сөйлемдермен айтыңыз.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. I especially like landscapes and cityscapes because they show very different atmospheres. For example, I take photos of beaches, lakes and mountain ranges when I travel. I post them on my personal Instagram so I can remember trips and share memories with friends.

Sugestão: Good structure with contrast, but reduce hesitations and correct grammar (use present simple consistently: 'I prefer' not 'I wanted'). Use linking words ('however', 'but') and be specific about what you like in each setting. Keep it within five sentences. Kazakh guidance: Сөйлемдеріңізді қысқартыңыз, бөгде дыбыстарды азайтыңыз және уақыт формаларын дұрыстаңыз.

Exemplo: It depends on my mood. When I want excitement, I prefer urban views, especially city centers at night with bright lights. However, when I need peace and quiet, I prefer the countryside because it is calm and natural. These different settings inspire different kinds of photos.

Sugestão: Answer shows opinion but has grammar, word choice and clarity issues. Use a clear topic sentence ('I like both') and give concise reasons: familiarity and uniqueness at home; curiosity and discovery abroad. Correct tense and article use ('I have never seen many views abroad'). Use linking words ('because', 'but', 'however'). Kazakh advice: Қарапайым және дұрыс grammatika қолданыңыз, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз.

Exemplo: I like both places. In my country there are many beautiful scenes that I know well and want others to see. However, I also want to travel abroad because I have not seen much of the world and I would like to discover new landscapes and cultures.

× Absolutely, I really enjoyed too capturing 1 escapes and city spew.

✓ Absolutely, I really enjoy capturing landscapes and city scenes.

The student used 'enjoyed' (past) but context is a general habit so present simple 'enjoy' is correct. 'Too' is misplaced; remove it. '1 escapes' and 'city spew' are incorrect words: use 'landscapes' and 'city scenes'. Suggestion: use present simple for habitual actions and choose correct nouns.'

× I have a uh, it is a small hobby of mine because I have a personal Instagram uh.

✓ I have a small hobby: I run a personal Instagram.

Awkward phrasing and unnecessary filler words. Use 'a small hobby' without extra 'it is'. If referring to an account, say 'I run a personal Instagram' or 'a personal Instagram account'. Suggestion: remove fillers and use concise structure.'

× When I post many photo of interesting places, in my opinion it can be beaches, lakes, mountains.

✓ When I post many photos of interesting places, they can be beaches, lakes, or mountains.

'Photo' should be plural 'photos' to match 'many' (quantifier). 'In my opinion' is unnecessary here; better to use 'they' to refer to the photos and list examples with 'or'. Suggestion: match quantifiers with plural nouns and use clearer pronouns.'

× It helps to me umm remember my trip and share experience with my friends.

✓ It helps me remember my trips and share experiences with my friends.

Use 'helps me' not 'helps to me'. 'Trip' and 'experience' should be plural to match general meaning. Suggestion: use correct object pronoun after 'help' and pluralize for general statements.'

× It depends on my mood because whenever I want some excitement, I prefer more urban areas with seating, uh, centers, night city centers with the lights, umm.

✓ It depends on my mood because whenever I want some excitement, I prefer urban areas with shopping centers and night city centers with the lights.

'Prefer more urban areas' is acceptable but word order and word choice 'seating' is wrong — use 'shopping'. Remove fillers. Maintain present simple for habitual preferences. Suggestion: use precise nouns and keep present simple for preferences.'

× But when I wanted to relax or just be my be by myself, I prefer more peaceful countryside.

✓ But when I want to relax or just be by myself, I prefer the peaceful countryside.

Mix of past 'wanted' and present 'prefer' creates tense inconsistency; use present 'want' for general habit. 'Be my be by myself' is incorrect — use 'be by myself'. Use definite article 'the' with 'countryside' when referring generally to that environment. Suggestion: keep tenses consistent and remove repeated words.'

× I would say that both because in my home country is there are a lot of beautiful, uh, scenes that I think everyone should see,

✓ I would say both because in my home country there are a lot of beautiful scenes that I think everyone should see,

Incorrect word order 'in my home country is there are' should be 'in my home country there are'. Remove filler 'uh'. Ensure subject-verb agreement: 'there are a lot of beautiful scenes'. Suggestion: use correct subject-verb order and avoid fillers.'

× but it undeniably that I personally have been never seen a lot of, uh, views abroad.

✓ but undeniably I have never seen many views abroad.

The phrase 'it undeniably that' is ungrammatical; use 'undeniably' to modify the clause. 'Have been never seen' mixes passive and perfect incorrectly — use 'have never seen'. 'A lot of' with countable 'views' fits but 'many views' is more natural. Suggestion: use correct adverb placement and standard present perfect 'have never seen'.'

× And I wish that I could explore the world and see all the views of the world.

✓ And I wish I could explore the world and see its many views.

Redundant phrase 'see all the views of the world' is wordy. 'I wish that I could' can be simplified to 'I wish I could'. Use possessive 'its' to avoid repetition. Suggestion: simplify and avoid redundancy.'