Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Сократите повторения и дайте чёткое основное предложение, затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных поддерживающих детали. Используйте связки (например, 'because', 'for example', 'so') и замените расплывчатые выражения («very interesting», «very high quality») на конкретные причины или примеры. Ограничьте ответ до 3–4 предложений.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views because it helps me capture unique scenes and moods. For example, I like shooting sunsets and cityscapes since the light changes quickly and creates dramatic colours. I also take short videos sometimes to record the movement of people and traffic.

Sugestão: Устраните неясные или неправильные слова (например, 'RoyalS') и дайте одно ясное утверждение с обоснованием. Добавьте конкретный пример того, что привлекает вас в городских пейзажах, используя связки ('because', 'for example'). Держите ответ в пределах 2–3 предложений.

Exemplo: I prefer urban areas because they offer diverse architecture and bustling street life. For example, I enjoy photographing old buildings, busy markets and neon-lit streets because they provide interesting details and varied compositions.

Sugestão: Исправьте лексические ошибки ('wheels' → 'views' или 'places') и сформулируйте одно ясное объяснение, почему предпочитаете свою страну. Добавьте конкретное воспоминание или пример места из детства и свяжите это с фотографированием. Не более 3 предложений.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing views in my own country because I grew up here and know many special spots. For instance, I often visit the riverside where I used to play as a child; the familiar scenes let me capture personal and meaningful photos.

× I like taking pictures of different views because it's very high quality and I like taking photos and taking pictures and taking videos.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views because they are very high quality, and I enjoy taking photos and videos.

The student used 'it's' (singular) to refer to 'pictures' (plural) and repeated phrases. Replace 'it's' with 'they are' for plural agreement and simplify repeated phrases. Use 'photos and videos' instead of repeating 'taking pictures'. This improves subject-pronoun agreement and clarity.

× It's very interesting job and taking pictures is very interesting.

✓ It is a very interesting job, and taking pictures is very enjoyable.

The original sentence is repetitive and missing an article before 'very interesting job'. Add 'a' before 'very interesting job' and replace the second 'very interesting' with 'very enjoyable' to avoid repetition and improve sentence flow.

× Yeah, from my point of view, I prefer urban areas because it's very popular.

✓ Yeah, from my point of view, I prefer urban areas because they are very popular.

The pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'urban areas' (plural). Use 'they are' for plural agreement. Also 'popular' describes 'areas', so plural pronoun is required.

× And now in my country I prefer urban Royals because I take pictures a lot of beautiful places and I like urban areas.

✓ And now in my country I prefer urban areas because I can take pictures of many beautiful places, and I like urban areas.

'Urban Royals' is incorrect word choice; likely intended 'urban areas'. The verb phrase 'take pictures a lot of beautiful places' is ungrammatical—use 'take pictures of many beautiful places'. This corrects word choice and preposition use.

× My prefer wheels in my own country because my childhood was here and I prefer wheels own country because it's very popular in my country and it's very big and comfortable to take pictures.

✓ I prefer views in my own country because my childhood was here, and I prefer my country's views because they are popular, large, and comfortable for taking pictures.

Original contains many incorrect words ('wheels'), unclear structure, and repeated ideas. Replace 'wheels' with 'views', add subject 'I', restructure sentence with two clauses joined by 'and', and use plural pronouns 'they are' to match 'views'. Use adjectives 'popular, large, and comfortable' to describe views for taking pictures.