Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and directly responds, but it's brief and slightly repetitive. Expand with one or two specific details (why it gives you happiness, what kinds of views you enjoy) and use a linking phrase to sound more natural.

Exemplo: Yes, I do. Photography makes me happy because it lets me capture moments and memories, especially colorful sunsets and lively street scenes. For example, when I photograph a sunset I feel relaxed and later enjoy looking back at the photos.

Sugestão: Good balanced response and clear comparison, but the sentences are slightly long and some vocabulary is basic. Use a topic sentence, then one supporting detail for each side with a linking word like 'however' or 'while' to improve coherence and precision.

Exemplo: I enjoy both rural and urban views. While rural areas appeal to me because of their natural landscapes such as fields and forests, urban areas attract me with modern architecture and lively cityscapes.

Sugestão: The answer addresses the question but is repetitive and contains grammar errors and vague phrasing. Improve by giving one clear comparison with specific examples and correct grammar. Use linking words (for example, however) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: I like views both in my country and abroad because they offer different attractions. For instance, in China I enjoy traditional architecture like ancient temples, whereas in the UK I appreciate historic stone buildings and green countryside, which feel very different from what I see at home.

× Yes, because I think photography can give me happiness.

✓ Yes, because I think photography gives me happiness.

The student used 'can give' which is not incorrect but less natural here. The present simple 'gives' fits habitual/general truth about photography providing happiness. Use present tense for general statements: 'photography gives me happiness.'

× Actually I love both of them because I think rural areas have many natural beauties but in urban areas they have more modern and new buildings in the city.

✓ Actually I love both because I think rural areas have many natural attractions, but urban areas have more modern buildings.

Problems: unnecessary pronoun 'them' after 'both' and awkward phrasing 'natural beauties' and repetition 'more modern and new buildings in the city.' Correction removes 'them', uses 'attractions' and simplifies 'urban areas have more modern buildings.' Avoid redundant words and keep parallel structure.

× For example, I I live in China.

✓ For example, I live in China.

There is a duplicate 'I'. Remove the extra word. The present tense 'I live' is appropriate for stating where you reside.

× I think China have many traditional Chinese buildings.

✓ I think China has many traditional Chinese buildings.

Subject 'China' is singular, so the verb must be singular 'has' not 'have.' Use subject-verb agreement: singular subjects take singular verbs.

× But I also love the views in the UK. I think in the UK I can see more.

✓ But I also love the views in the UK; I think I can see more historic and varied architecture there.

The second sentence 'I think in the UK I can see more' is incomplete and vague. Improve sentence structure by specifying what 'more' refers to (historic and varied architecture) and place 'there' to clarify location. Combining into one sentence or adding specifics makes it clearer and more natural.