Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and use a clear topic sentence. Organize into 2–3 sentences: state your preference, give one specific reason or example, and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, since, because) and correct minor grammar (e.g., "I really love taking pictures" not "to take the pictures").

Exemplo: I love taking pictures of different views because photography has been my hobby since childhood. For example, when I got my first smartphone it became much easier to capture landscapes and city scenes, so I now take photos whenever I travel or walk around my neighborhood.

Sugestão: Give a direct answer first (urban or rural or both), then support it with specific reasons and a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like "not that deep" and finish sentences fully. Limit to 2–3 sentences and use correct grammar (e.g., "it depends on your mood").

Exemplo: I don't have a strong preference because it depends on my mood: sometimes I enjoy urban views for their architecture and busy streets, and other times I prefer rural views for quiet landscapes. For instance, I photograph city skylines when I'm exploring downtown but choose countryside scenes when I want peaceful nature shots.

Sugestão: Answer directly (e.g., I like both) and give a clear reason and one specific example. Avoid incomplete sentences and word-choice errors (e.g., "views are" not "views is"). Use linking words like "however" or "also" to contrast ideas.

Exemplo: I like views in my own country because they are familiar and varied, but I also enjoy seeing scenery abroad to learn about different cultures. For example, I often photograph local historical sites at home, but I make a point of taking landscape photos whenever I travel to a new country to compare styles and scenery.

× I'm this kind of person and I really really love to take the pictures and it's my hobby.

✓ I'm the kind of person who really loves to take pictures; it's my hobby.

Original uses 'I'm this kind of person' (awkward) and 'love to take the pictures' (incorrect article use and pronoun/reference). Use 'the kind of person who' to introduce a relative clause; 'loves' agrees with singular subject (subject-verb agreement, third person singular) and omit 'the' before 'pictures' for general activity. Combine into one clear sentence with a semicolon or conjunction.

× Also from my childhood I really liked beautiful views and when I get my personal phone it's so easy.

✓ Since my childhood I have really liked beautiful views, and when I got my first phone it became so easy.

Tense inconsistency: 'from my childhood I really liked' should use present perfect 'have liked' to show a continuing preference since childhood. 'when I get my personal phone' mixes present with past; use past 'got' for the event, and 'it became so easy' shows result in past. Also 'first phone' is clearer than 'personal phone.'

× It was easier to take and pick pictures from different.

✓ It became easier to take and choose pictures from different places.

Sentence is incomplete and ungrammatical: 'to take and pick pictures from different' lacks an object after 'different.' Use 'choose' instead of 'pick' for clarity and add 'places.' Use 'became' to indicate change in ease.

× From my opinion, it's not that deep because for urban areas and rural areas it's kind of different to views and it depend on your mood.

✓ In my opinion, it isn't that simple because views in urban areas and rural areas are different, and it depends on your mood.

Use 'In my opinion' instead of 'From my opinion.' 'Not that deep' is unnatural; 'not that simple' fits better. Preposition and word order: 'views in urban areas' rather than 'for urban areas.' Subject-verb agreement: 'it depend' should be 'it depends.'

× But I think it's always beautiful to have this kind of beautiful views and if you like taking.

✓ But I think it's always beautiful to have these kinds of views if you like taking photos.

Number agreement: 'this kind of beautiful views' mixes singular 'this kind' with plural 'views'—use 'these kinds of views' or 'this kind of view.' 'If you like taking' is incomplete; specify 'photos' or 'pictures.'

× My country is so beautiful and views is also really sophisticated and I think if you are a person that loves their country, prefer their country views, but it's important to explore in other countries and it helps you to.

✓ My country is very beautiful and its views are also very impressive. I think if you love your country, you prefer its views, but it's important to explore other countries because that also helps you.

Several issues: 'views is' violates subject-verb agreement—use 'views are.' 'Sophisticated' is odd for scenery; 'impressive' fits better. Pronoun agreement: use 'your' and 'its' rather than 'their' when referring to one person or one country. 'Prefer their country views' should be 'prefer its views' and 'explore in other countries' should be 'explore other countries.' 'It helps you to' is incomplete; finish with 'helps you' or 'helps you broaden your perspective.'