Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar, fluency and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence that directly answers the question, avoid filler sounds (e.g. "uh"), correct verb forms (use "interested in taking"), and keep it concise (max 3–4 sentences). Add a brief specific reason or example using a linking word (e.g. "however", "but").

Exemplo: No, I'm not really interested in taking photographs. However, I often take a quick photo when I'm out to remember a place or share it with friends. For example, I sometimes photograph an interesting building or a sunset when I travel.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a topic sentence and improve sentence structure and vocabulary. Remove hesitations ("uh") and use linking words ("because", "for example") to connect reasons. Use comparative and descriptive vocabulary correctly (e.g. "fresher air", "more peaceful") and keep it within 2–4 sentences with specific details.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are usually more peaceful and have fresher air. For example, the rolling hills and quiet lakes in the countryside help me relax more than busy city streets.

Sugestão: Provide a clear direct answer and correct pronoun and grammar errors ("I prefer views in my own country"). Give 1–2 specific reasons and an example, and avoid unclear phrases like "but I am not hesitated." Use linking words such as "because" and "for example" to make the response coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the best places and they have unique landscapes. For example, I love visiting Murray Hills and Nagpur, where the scenery and local culture feel familiar and special to me.

× No, I am not really interested taking pictures, but I usually and to take a picture when I am out.

✓ No, I am not really interested in taking pictures, but I usually like to take a picture when I am out.

Missing preposition 'in' after 'interested' (pattern: interested in + verb-ing) and incorrect phrase 'usually and to' which seems to aim for 'usually like to' or 'usually take'. Use 'like to take' to express regular preference. Suggestion: learn verbs that require specific prepositions (interested in) and common collocations like 'usually like to'.

× In my perspective, I prefer UH view in rural areas because uh rural areas have more beautiful views, peaceful and air fresher, and UH I feel calm.

✓ From my perspective, I prefer views in rural areas because rural areas have more beautiful scenery, are more peaceful and have fresher air, and I feel calm there.

Problems: 'In my perspective' is non-idiomatic — use 'From my perspective'. 'I prefer UH view' has wrong pronoun/word; should be 'views'. Missing verbs in list: 'peaceful and air fresher' lacks 'are' and 'have' to form correct clauses. Repetition of filler 'uh'. Also add 'there' to clarify location. Suggestion: use natural phrases ('From my perspective'), ensure plural consistency, and include linking verbs when listing qualities.

× I prefer you in our country because my country has more beautiful places, some places such as Murray Hills, Nagpur and other my country views but I am not hesitated.

✓ I prefer views in my country because my country has many beautiful places, such as Murray Hills and Nagpur, and I am not hesitant.

Problems: 'I prefer you in our country' uses wrong pronoun 'you' and 'our' inconsistent with speaker perspective; should be 'views' and 'my country'. 'Some places such as Murray Hills, Nagpur and other my country views' is ungrammatical — reorder to 'such as Murray Hills and Nagpur'. 'I am not hesitated' uses wrong form; use adjective 'hesitant' after 'am'. Suggestion: choose correct nouns/pronouns, use 'not hesitant' for ability to act, and list examples clearly with commas.