Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Старайтесь формулировать ответ более грамотно и естественно: начинайте с прямого утверждения, затем добавляйте 1–2 предложения с конкретными деталями. Избегайте разговорных вставок («uh», «yeah») и грамматических ошибок (например, «take a picture everything» → «take pictures of everything»). Используйте связку для плавного перехода к деталям.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes and city scenes when I travel, focusing on interesting angles and lighting. For example, I like to take shots from high points to capture a wide panorama.

Sugestão: Дайте чёткий ответ сразу, затем поясните причину с конкретным сравнением. Избегайте неопределённых фраз («everything», «it's not matter») и разговорных междометий. Используйте связующие слова (for example, because, however) для логичности.

Exemplo: I don't have a strong preference because I find both urban and rural views appealing. For example, I like urban views for their architecture and lively streets, but I also enjoy rural landscapes for their peace and natural beauty.

Sugestão: Дайте чёткий и уверенный ответ, избегая повторов и колебаний («umm», «uh»). Обоснуйте своё мнение конкретными причинами и приведите пример. Проверьте грамматику (например, «they also has» → «it also has»), и стройте ответ в 2–3 предложениях максимум.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm more familiar with its landscapes and cultural landmarks. For instance, I love the coastal scenery at sunset near my hometown, which I haven't seen elsewhere.

× Yes, I like to take a picture everything when I see it, beautiful views.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of everything when I see beautiful views.

The student used 'to take a picture everything' which has incorrect noun number and missing preposition. Use the plural 'pictures' for general habits and 'of' to link the object. Also remove the extra 'it' and reorder to 'see beautiful views'. Suggestion: say 'I like to take pictures of everything when I see beautiful views.'

× I usually take a top photo and yeah.

✓ I usually take a photo from the top and so on.

The phrase 'take a top photo' is unclear and 'top' requires a preposition to indicate viewpoint. 'And yeah' is informal; 'and so on' or omitting it is better. Suggestion: use clear prepositional phrases like 'from the top' or 'from above.'

× I think I prefer everything, uh, when I see a beautiful place and cities, you know, nature, it's not matter because all of the view is beautiful.

✓ I think I prefer everything: beautiful places, cities, and nature. It doesn't matter because all views are beautiful.

Multiple pronoun and agreement issues: 'it's not matter' should be 'it doesn't matter'. 'All of the view is beautiful' should be 'all views are beautiful' (plural). Also the sentence was run-on and unclear; split into two sentences and list items clearly. Suggestion: use 'it doesn't matter' for negation and plural 'views.'

× I don't think about it, but maybe I prefer my own country because umm, I don't see uh, a beautiful view in different country and I like my country and I think my country is very beautiful and they also has a very beautiful ways views.

✓ I haven't thought about it much, but maybe I prefer my own country because I don't often see beautiful views in other countries. I like my country; I think it is very beautiful and it also has many beautiful scenic spots.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: 'I don't think about it' is awkward for the context — 'I haven't thought about it' fits better. 'A beautiful view in different country' needs 'in other countries' (plural) and no article. 'They also has' mixes plural subject with singular verb; use 'it also has' for 'my country' or rephrase to 'it also has many beautiful scenic spots.' Suggestions: use present perfect for prior consideration, use 'other countries' and ensure subject-verb agreement.