Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevabınız samimi fakat kafa karıştırıcı kelime seçimleri ve dilbilgisi hataları var. Konuya doğrudan başlan: “Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views.” gibi net bir konu cümlesi kullanın. Ek bilgi verirken 'vibes' yerine 'views' veya 'scenes' gibi uygun kelimeler seçin ve gereksiz ifadeleri çıkarın. Ayrıca ikinci cümlenizi açıklayıcı örnekle ve bağlaçla bağlayın. Örnek: neden fotoğraf çekmeyi sevdiğinizi ve hangi tür sahnelerden hoşlandığınızı belirtin. Dilbilgisi için basit zamanları doğru kullanın ve gereksiz soru kalıplarından kaçının.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I like capturing city streets and natural landscapes because they show interesting colours and shapes. I also sometimes photograph people to record candid moments, which adds emotion to my collection.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda tercih net ama tekrar ve kelime tekrarı var. Daha akıcı ve mantıklı bağlaçlar kullanın (for example, because, so). 'Light of the season' ifadesi yerine 'seasonal light' veya 'the light at certain times of day' kullanın. Cümleleri 2-3 kısa cümleyle sınırlayın ve spesifik bir neden ile bir örnek verin (ör. gün batımında nasıl bir etki sağladığı).

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because the city offers dramatic lighting and reflections. For example, at sunset the glass buildings catch warm colours, creating striking contrasts that make my photos more interesting.

Sugestão: Cevabınızda dilbilgisi ve mantık hataları var; ayrıca tekrarlar konuşmayı anlaşılmaz kılıyor. Tek bir net cümleyle başlayın: 'I prefer views in my own country.' Ardından açık bir neden verin ve bir örnekle destekleyin. Milliyet vurgusunu yapacaksanız doğru gramerle ifade edin (ör. 'we Turks' ve 'we are proud of our country'). Gereksiz tekrar ve karışık kelime diziminden kaçının.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I'm familiar with the landscapes and cultural places here. For example, I enjoy photographing historical sites and local festivals that reflect our traditions and colours.

× Do you? Yes actually I love taking pictures of different vibes, maybe a person and other things. I haven't made a Google for this.

✓ Yes, actually I love taking pictures of different views, maybe of a person and other things. I haven't created a Google album for this.

The student used 'vibes' instead of 'views' (word choice) and misused pronouns/prepositions: 'maybe a person' should be 'maybe of a person'. 'I haven't made a Google for this' is unclear; 'created a Google album' or 'made a Google Photos album' is clearer. Suggestion: use correct nouns and prepositions (e.g., 'pictures of different views' and 'maybe of a person'), and use precise phrases for services (e.g., 'created a Google Photos album').

× I prefer urban I guess because of the light of the season, light of sun and I love sunsets for my pictures and photos.

✓ I prefer urban areas, I guess, because of the seasonal light, the sunlight, and I love sunsets for my pictures.

Missing plural and article usage: 'urban' should be 'urban areas' to match meaning. 'light of the season' is awkward; use 'seasonal light'. 'light of sun' should be 'the sunlight'. Also remove redundancy 'pictures and photos'. Suggestion: use plural nouns when comparing areas and use definite article with 'sunlight' when specifying it.

× I prefers my countries, of course, because we are Turks and we love our country and our.

✓ I prefer my country, of course, because we are Turkish and we love our country.

'Prefers' is third-person singular form but the subject is 'I' so it should be 'prefer'. 'My countries' is incorrect; context implies singular 'my country'. 'We are Turks' is acceptable but 'we are Turkish' is more natural here. Remove the trailing 'and our' which is incomplete. Suggestion: match verb to subject and keep noun number consistent.

× Because I we because we are kids and we allow the our countries.

✓ Because when we were children we loved and protected our country.

The original sentence has mixed pronouns and fragments: 'I we because we are kids' is ungrammatical. 'we allow the our countries' is incorrect usage of 'allow' and article 'the'. Likely intended meaning is that as children they loved/protected their country. Suggestion: simplify to a clear clause like 'when we were children we loved and protected our country' and use correct verbs (love/protect) and correct articles ('our country').