Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cải thiện tính tự nhiên và mạch lạc: Tránh ấp úng và lặp từ (ví dụ: "uh", "I am I'm"). Bắt đầu bằng câu trả lời trực tiếp, sau đó nêu 1–2 chi tiết cụ thể (nơi bạn đến, loại cảnh bạn chụp) và kết thúc bằng lý do ngắn gọn. Giữ tối đa 4 câu, dùng liên từ để nối ý (for example, because, so).

Exemplo: Yes, I do. I often visit cafes and restaurants with attractive windows or terraces because I enjoy photographing cityscapes and cozy interiors. For example, I like taking photos of morning light through café windows to capture a relaxed atmosphere.

Sugestão: Làm rõ câu chủ đề và dùng từ vựng chính xác: Trả lời trực tiếp rồi giải thích với ví dụ cụ thể. Tránh lỗi phát âm/viết tên ("Barbara" không phù hợp) và ngữ pháp (plural/singular). Sử dụng liên từ như "because" hoặc "for example" để nối ý, đưa ra 1 ví dụ so sánh ngắn gọn giữa nông thôn và thành phố.

Exemplo: I prefer both because they offer different kinds of beauty. For example, rural areas are peaceful and full of natural scenery, which is great for peaceful photos, while urban areas are modern and lively, offering interesting architecture and street scenes.

Sugestão: Trả lời trực tiếp, ngắn gọn và rõ ràng: Bắt đầu bằng "I prefer...", tránh các từ đệm như "you know" và lặp từ. Nên nêu 1–2 lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: đa dạng cảnh đẹp, dễ tiếp cận, văn hóa). Giữ 2–3 câu, dùng liên từ như "because" hoặc "so" để nối ý.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because Vietnam has a wide variety of landscapes, from mountains to beaches. I also enjoy exploring local culture and believe there are many beautiful places I haven't seen yet, so I plan to travel more around Vietnam.

× I have, I often hang out, uh, going to coffee, uh, or eat in many restaurant where have many, uh, beautiful view to take a picture because I am I'm a person who.

✓ I often hang out, go to coffee shops, or eat in many restaurants that have beautiful views to take pictures because I am a person who enjoys photography.

The original sentence has multiple sentence structure problems: fragments, incorrect verb forms, missing articles, and an unclear clause. Combine fragments into a single coherent sentence. Use the base verb forms in a list (hang out, go, eat), plural 'restaurants', the relative pronoun 'that' to introduce the clause, the plural noun 'views', and a clearer ending 'enjoys photography'. Suggestions: list parallel verbs, use correct plural forms, add articles where needed, and finish the clause with a clear verb phrase.

× I love both because each places have different feature and beauty.

✓ I love both because each place has different features and beauty.

'Each' is followed by a singular noun, so 'place' should be singular and the verb must agree: 'has'. Also 'feature' should be plural 'features' to match the idea of multiple characteristics. Suggestion: use 'each place has' or 'all places have' depending on meaning.

× For example, rural areas Barbara was quiet and peace in contact uh, Urban area Barbara was uh modern and entertainment.

✓ For example, rural areas are quiet and peaceful in contrast, while urban areas are modern and entertaining.

The original uses 'was' inconsistently and misuses words ('peace in contact', 'Barbara'). Use present simple 'are' to describe general characteristics. Use adjective 'peaceful' (not the noun 'peace') and the comparative phrase 'in contrast'. Use 'entertaining' as the adjective. Also make 'urban areas' plural to parallel 'rural areas'. Suggestion: describe general facts in present simple and choose correct adjective forms.

× Is in my country, you know, I'm from Vietnam, uh, a nation with many beautiful places, uh, nature places.

✓ It's in my country, you know. I'm from Vietnam, a nation with many beautiful natural places.

The original begins with 'Is in my country' which is a fragment and incorrect word order. Use 'It's in my country' or 'It's in my country; I'm from Vietnam.' 'Nature places' is ungrammatical — use 'natural places'. Break into two clearer sentences. Suggestion: use 'It's' or 'In my country' and correct adjective form 'natural'.

× I want to travel around Vietnam and want to see many beautiful views in here.

✓ I want to travel around Vietnam and see many beautiful views here.

The phrase 'in here' is redundant; use 'here'. Also use parallel verb structure: 'want to travel... and see...' rather than repeating 'want'. The base verb 'see' follows 'want to'. Suggestion: use concise phrasing and maintain parallelism in coordinated verbs.