Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is positive and relevant but is disfluent and contains repetition and grammatical errors. Make a clear topic sentence, avoid repeating phrases, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Aim for 2–3 concise sentences and correct word forms.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views, especially when I travel. For example, I like photographing landscapes and street scenes because they help me remember the places I visited.

Sugestão: Good content but unclear vocabulary and grammar reduce clarity. Start with a direct statement, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words (because, for example). Use correct noun forms and precise vocabulary (greenery, wooden houses, ponds).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because there is a lot of greenery and peaceful scenery. For example, I enjoy seeing ponds, wooden cottages and wide fields, which feel more relaxing than city streets.

Sugestão: Your answer expresses a clear preference but is wordy and contains hesitations and grammar issues. Give a concise topic sentence, then add specific supporting details and one linking phrase. Use correct verb forms and reduce fillers like 'umm' and repeated words.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country, Bangladesh, because it offers diverse landscapes. For instance, we have beautiful beaches, green hills and peaceful countryside, so I often enjoy exploring them.

× Yes I do like taking picture of different views especially when I go for a tour or go for in different go for different places is take.

✓ Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views, especially when I go on a tour or visit different places.

The sentence has several issues: 'taking picture' should be plural 'taking pictures' (singular/plural issue but corrected under present participle context), 'go for a tour' is incorrect preposition use — use 'go on a tour', and 'go for in different go for different places is take' is ungrammatical and redundant. Use 'visit different places'. Keep verbs in correct present participle and simple present forms to match habitual action: 'I do like taking' and 'I go on/visit'. Reduce redundancy and reorder for clarity.

× Well I do prefer views in rural area because there is so greenery, a lot of trees, ponds, tiny homes made by some things made by wooden or some made by mark.

✓ Well, I prefer views in rural areas because there is so much greenery: a lot of trees, ponds, and small houses made of wood or other materials.

Use plural 'rural areas' for general preference (singular/plural issue combined but primarily preposition/phrase choice). 'There is so greenery' is incorrect — use 'there is so much greenery' to quantify an uncountable noun. 'Tiny homes made by some things made by wooden or some made by mark' is unclear; use 'small houses made of wood or other materials.' Prepositions and prepositional phrases must be correct: 'made of' not 'made by'. Also add articles and commas for clarity.

× I feel it's so beautiful to see.

✓ I feel it's so beautiful to look at.

The original is understandable but 'to see' is less natural here; 'to look at' is the correct collocation with 'beautiful'. This also improves verb choice and flow. No tense change is needed—present simple expresses general feeling.

× I love my own country umm well I live in Bangladesh it's uh very beautiful country and there is quite place for go out and umm lots of greeneries, sea, mountains umm my country have everything so umm I I prefer view in my own country.

✓ I love my country. I live in Bangladesh; it's a very beautiful country and there are many places to visit, with lots of greenery, the sea, and mountains. My country has everything, so I prefer the views in my own country.

Multiple article and agreement errors: 'it's uh very beautiful country' needs the article 'a' before 'very beautiful country'. 'There is quite place for go out' should be 'there are many places to visit' (count noun plural + correct verb 'are' and infinitive 'to visit'). 'Lots of greeneries' — 'greenery' is uncountable, so use 'lots of greenery'. 'My country have' should be 'my country has' (subject-verb agreement). 'I prefer view' should be 'I prefer the views' (article and plural). Break into sentences for clarity and correct punctuation.