Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make your response more natural and precise by correcting grammar, using a clear topic sentence, and adding one specific example. Keep it concise (maximum 5 sentences) and use a linking phrase to connect ideas.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views, especially when I travel abroad. It helps me preserve memories and special moments, so I can easily recall them later. For example, when I visited Kyoto last year I took many photos of the temples and maple trees which always remind me of that trip.

Sugestão: Give a direct topic sentence stating your preference, use clear contrast words, correct grammar, and provide a specific reason and example. Avoid vague phrases like "gives me some vibes."

Exemplo: It depends, but generally I prefer urban views at home because I appreciate the architecture and lively streets. However, when I travel abroad I usually choose rural scenery because the quiet countryside and natural landscapes help me relax, for example, hiking in a mountain village last summer felt very peaceful.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement, correct tense and phrasing, replace informal words like "vibes" with precise adjectives, and add a specific detail to support your preference. Keep it within 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries, particularly places like Switzerland. I visited Switzerland at the end of last year and was struck by its peaceful, unspoiled landscapes and clear mountain lakes, which are quite different from the scenery in my home country.

× It can keep memory and special moment so I can recall it when I look through those pictures.

✓ It can keep memories and special moments so I can recall them when I look through those pictures.

Plural nouns are required for countable nouns referring to multiple items (memories, special moments). Also pronoun 'it' is singular but refers to plural 'memories/moments', so use 'them'. This fixes subject–pronoun agreement and makes the sentence clear.

× It would depend, I prefer views in urban areas when I live at my home country.

✓ It depends; I prefer views in urban areas when I live in my home country.

'Would depend' is inappropriate for a general preference; use simple present 'depends'. Preposition 'in' is correct with 'country' (not 'at'). Also punctuation adjusted for clarity.

× However, when I go to abroad like travel abroad, I prefer rural areas because it gives me some vibes.

✓ However, when I travel abroad, I prefer rural areas because they give me a certain vibe.

Do not use 'go to abroad'; use 'travel abroad' or 'go abroad'. 'It gives me some vibes' is vague and uses singular 'it' with plural 'areas'; use plural 'they' and 'a certain vibe' (or 'vibes') for natural English.

× I prefer views in other countries, especially Switzerland where I've been to last year like the end of last year.

✓ I prefer views in other countries, especially Switzerland, which I visited at the end of last year.

When giving a finished past time ('last year'), use the simple past 'visited' rather than present perfect 'I've been to'. Also 'where' referring to a place works but 'which' is more natural with 'Switzerland' in this structure; clarify time expression 'at the end of last year'.

× It gave me peaceful and natural vibes that I cannot find in my home country.

✓ It gave me peaceful, natural vibes that I could not find in my home country.

Parallel adjectives should be separated by a comma. Since the travel experience is past ('It gave me'), the verb in the relative clause should match that past perspective: 'could not find' instead of present 'cannot find' to maintain tense consistency.