Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct tense and singular/plural forms, and make sentences more concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific reason with a linking word. Avoid vague phrases like “it memorized me.”

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually photograph scenery when I travel because photos help me remember special moments, and I often look at them when I feel bored. For example, I took many photos at the beach last summer to remind me of the trip.

Sugestão: Make the answer more fluent and grammatically correct. Begin with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons linked with connectors (for example, because/and). Use plural and articles correctly (e.g., “rural areas have a lot of…”).

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they have a lot of natural beauty, such as trees and birds. Also, rural landscapes are usually quieter and less crowded than cities, so I find them more relaxing and peaceful.

Sugestão: Clarify and organize the response: state your preference clearly, then list specific examples with correct names and linking words. Avoid repetition and correct the place names and phrasing (e.g., “Sundarbans, Cox’s Bazar, Rangamati”).

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many beautiful natural places. For example, I love the Sundarbans, Cox’s Bazar and Rangamati, which offer unique landscapes and wildlife that I enjoy seeing.

× Yes I like taking picture but I have one thought picture is memory.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures, but I have one thought: pictures are memories.

The noun 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' because the speaker refers to pictures in general (Grammar Problem Type 1: singular and plural issue). Also 'picture is memory' is ungrammatical and should be 'pictures are memories' to match plural subject with plural verb and make a clear meaning. Added a colon and commas for clarity and natural phrasing.

× So when I travel new place and beautiful places then I take pictures because it memorized me when I feel bored.

✓ So when I travel to new and beautiful places, I take pictures because they remind me of those times when I feel bored.

Several issues: 'travel new place' needs the preposition 'to' (Grammar Problem Type 11). 'Beautiful places' should be coordinated with 'new' as 'new and beautiful places' (Grammar Problem Type 18: order of adjectives). 'It memorized me' is incorrect; to express that pictures cause recollection use 'they remind me' (Grammar Problem Type 9: past participle misuse and Grammar Problem Type 12: pronoun reference). Also 'it' should be 'they' to agree with plural 'pictures' (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 27: subject-verb/pronoun agreement). Adjusted tense to present simple 'remind' because the habit is general (Grammar Problem Type 6: present tense issue).

× In my opinion rural area is best because rural area have lot of natural beauty like trees, birds and another natural element.

✓ In my opinion, rural areas are best because they have a lot of natural beauty, like trees, birds, and other natural elements.

Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally (Grammar Problem Type 1). Add commas for clarity. 'Rural area is best' should be 'rural areas are best' so subject and verb agree (Grammar Problem Type 27). 'Have lot of' needs the article 'a' as 'have a lot of' (Grammar Problem Type 22: article errors). 'Another natural element' is unnatural; use 'other natural elements' (Grammar Problem Type 13: adjective/noun form and Grammar Problem Type 18: adjective order).

× That's why I always prefer rural areas.

✓ That's why I always prefer rural areas.

This sentence is actually correct; no grammatical change is needed. It is included to show there is no third person singular error here (Grammar Problem Type 2). Kept as is.

× I prefer my own country because my country has lots of beautiful and natural places.

✓ I prefer my own country because it has many beautiful natural places.

Replace the repetitive 'my country has' with 'it has' for cohesion and use 'many' instead of 'lots of' for a more natural formal expression (Grammar Problem Type 12: pronoun use and Grammar Problem Type 14: quantifier). Also 'beautiful and natural places' is better as 'beautiful natural places' (Grammar Problem Type 18: order of adjectives).

× It is Sundarbang, Cox Bazaar, Rangamati and also I like this place that's why I prefer my own country.

✓ Places like Sundarbans, Cox's Bazar, and Rangamati are examples, and I like these places; that's why I prefer my own country.

Place names need correct forms: 'Sundarbang' should be 'Sundarbans' and 'Cox Bazaar' is commonly 'Cox's Bazar' (Grammar Problem Type 17: definite article and proper noun accuracy). Use plural or demonstrative pronoun 'these places' instead of 'this place' when listing multiple places (Grammar Problem Type 1 and 12). Added punctuation and restructuring for clarity (Grammar Problem Type 26: sentence structure errors).