Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Câu trả lời cần tự nhiên hơn, ngữ pháp chính xác hơn và tránh lặp từ/câu thừa. Hãy mở đầu trực tiếp trả lời câu hỏi, sửa lỗi động từ (I don't usually take pictures), giảm tiếng ừ/à, và bổ sung chi tiết cụ thể về thời gian, nơi chụp hoặc mục đích (ví dụ: phong cảnh, kiến trúc, đăng lên mạng xã hội). Nên dùng tối đa 4-5 câu và kết nối các ý bằng từ nối đơn giản.

Exemplo: I don't usually take photos, but I enjoy photographing interesting scenes sometimes. For example, when I go out with friends at weekends I often photograph street art or old buildings to share on social media. I like capturing moments that remind me of the day.

Sugestão: Cần câu trả lời rõ ràng, ngữ pháp tốt hơn (use 'prefer... to...' correctly) và cụ thể hóa lý do bằng ví dụ chi tiết. Tránh lặp từ ('very many') và dùng từ vựng phù hợp (e.g., architecture, street scenes). Kết hợp từ nối để làm ý mạch lạc.

Exemplo: I prefer views in urban areas because I live in Hanoi and the city offers diverse architecture and lively street scenes. For instance, I enjoy photographing old colonial buildings and busy markets, which provide interesting details and colours.

Sugestão: Câu trả lời nên bỏ lỗi ngữ pháp (I haven't had), nói rõ lập trường và thêm chi tiết cụ thể. Tránh lặp từ và tiếng ừ/à. Nên kết hợp tương lai đơn để diễn đạt dự định rõ ràng. Giữ 2-4 câu, nêu lý do và khả năng trong tương lai.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I haven't had the chance to travel abroad yet and I know many beautiful places here. However, if I get the opportunity to travel in the future, I would love to photograph famous landscapes and cultural sites in other countries.

× I'm not usually take pictures, but I also like taking pictures of different films.

✓ I don't usually take pictures, but I also like taking pictures of different films.

The student used 'I'm not usually take', which incorrectly combines the present continuous 'I'm' with an adverb of frequency and base verb. English uses the simple present with adverbs of frequency for habitual actions: 'I don't usually take'. Suggestion: use simple present for habits (I usually/ don't usually + base verb).

× Sometimes I go out with my friends. I still uh, find some beautiful view to uh, take a picture and a bit on the social media.

✓ Sometimes I go out with my friends. I still, uh, find some beautiful views to, uh, take pictures and post a bit on social media.

Several issues: plural for countable 'view' should be 'views' and plural for 'picture' when generalizing: 'take pictures'. 'Post' is the correct verb for putting content 'on social media'; 'a bit on the social media' is awkward—use 'post a bit on social media'. Use base verb forms after 'to' (to take) and match nouns' plurality. Suggestion: use plural forms for general activities and correct verbs for actions (post).

× I live in Hanoi, which is the capital in my country and also a big city, so I prefer views in urban areas to rural areas because there are many things for us to take a picture, like very many buildings and sceneries on street.

✓ I live in Hanoi, which is the capital of my country and also a big city, so I prefer views in urban areas to those in rural areas because there are many things for us to take pictures of, like many buildings and street scenery.

Preposition errors: 'capital in my country' should be 'capital of my country'. Comparison of areas: use 'those in rural areas' or 'rural areas' after 'to'. 'Take a picture' needs 'take pictures of' (verb + preposition). 'Sceneries on street' is incorrect: 'street scenery' or 'scenery on the streets'. Also 'very many' is unnatural; use 'many'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions ('of', 'in/on'), pluralize nouns as needed, and use natural collocations ('take pictures of', 'street scenery').

× I think I prefer views in my own country because I'm haven't had a chance to, uh, go abroad yet.

✓ I think I prefer views in my own country because I haven't had a chance to, uh, go abroad yet.

The student wrote 'I'm haven't had', which incorrectly combines the contracted form 'I'm' with the present perfect 'haven't had'. The correct auxiliary for present perfect is 'have/has' (I have not). Suggestion: use 'I haven't had' or 'I have not had' for present perfect negatives; do not add 'I'm'.

× Uh, but I, I think if, if uh, in the future I have an opportunity, I will try many sceneries in the world.

✓ Uh, but I think if in the future I have the opportunity, I will try many scenic places around the world.

'Try many sceneries' is unidiomatic: use 'visit many scenic places' or 'see many scenic spots'. 'An opportunity' is acceptable but 'the opportunity' is better in this context. Suggestion: choose more natural collocations for future plans ('visit/see scenic places around the world') and use 'the opportunity' when referring to a specific chance in future conditional sentences.