Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and repetition, make a clear topic sentence, and add one specific supporting detail using a linking word. Keep the answer to 2–4 concise sentences. For example, begin with a direct statement (Yes, I enjoy taking photos of scenery), then add why and a specific example.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of scenic views. For example, when I visit a picturesque village I photograph the old houses and surrounding hills to capture the atmosphere.

Sugestão: Make a clear preference statement, use linking words to explain reasons, and give one concrete detail or example. Avoid filler words and grammatical errors (e.g., singular/plural, articles). Limit to up to 4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because they are quieter and less polluted. For example, I like photographing green fields and mountains since the natural light and open space create better photos.

Sugestão: Start with a clear statement of preference, then give specific examples and correct grammar (use city names clearly, correct prepositions and articles). Use a linking word to add a reason or example. Keep it concise and avoid fillers.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has many stunning landscapes. For example, places like Pune and Tangy have beautiful mountains that are perfect for taking wide, detailed photos.

× Yes, of course, especially when the, uh, picture like a scenery view.

✓ Yes, of course, especially when the picture is like a scenery view.

Missing verb 'is' to link subject 'the picture' to the complement 'like a scenery view'. This is a sentence structure error and requires a present simple linking verb. Suggestion: include 'is' after the noun to form a complete clause.

× I, I would like to take the picture, uh, when I'm going outside or, or see some beautiful painting or, or picturesque village, then I, I'm might take a picture.

✓ I would like to take pictures when I go outside or see a beautiful painting or a picturesque village; I might take a picture then.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb forms and redundancy. 'When I'm going outside' is awkward—use simple present for habitual action: 'when I go outside.' 'See' should be parallel: 'or see a beautiful painting.' 'I'm might' is incorrect; use modal 'might' without 'am'. Also change 'the picture' to plural 'pictures' for general preference. Suggest using parallel structure and correct modal usage.

× I would prefer, ah, one rural areas because as it was, uh, there is there isn't so much much pollutions or, or, and there has a lot of greens, green spaces and nice environment and you can see the mountains and you can take a lot of the.

✓ I would prefer rural areas because there is not so much pollution, and there are a lot of green spaces and a nice environment; you can see the mountains and take many photos.

Several article and countability errors: 'one rural areas' mixes singular and plural—use 'rural areas' or 'a rural area'. 'So much much pollutions' is incorrect: 'pollution' is uncountable and use 'so much pollution' or 'not much pollution'. 'There has a lot of greens' is wrong; use 'there are a lot of green spaces' and 'a nice environment'. 'Take a lot of the' is incomplete—use 'take many photos'. Suggestions: ensure subject-verb agreement with 'there is/are', use correct uncountable nouns, and correct article usage.

× I'm prefer views of my own country because there are so many, many beautiful places like like hello, Pune and Tangy.

✓ I prefer views of my own country because there are many beautiful places like Pune and Tangy.

'I'm prefer' is incorrect; use simple present 'I prefer' for habitual preference. Extra fillers like 'hello' and repeated 'like' should be removed. Also 'so many, many' is redundant—use 'many' or 'so many'. Suggest using correct verb form for preference and concise phrasing.

× There has a, a mountains, a lot of the mountains and you can, uh, get a, a nice beautiful, uh, full photos of them.

✓ There are mountains, many of them, and you can get nice, full photos of them.

'There has' is incorrect; use 'there are' for plural 'mountains'. 'A mountains' mixes article with plural—remove 'a'. 'A nice beautiful, uh, full photos' mixes singular article with plural noun; use 'nice, full photos' or 'a nice, full photo'. Suggest ensuring articles match count (a/an with singular) and maintain plural forms consistently.