Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Focus on clear, direct sentences: give a topic sentence answering the question, then one or two specific supporting details. Avoid fillers and unclear words. Use correct verb forms and simpler vocabulary if unsure. For example, say when you take photos, how often, and what feelings or purposes you have. Keep answers under five sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I usually take photos when I travel or during weekend walks, about once a week. I take photos to remember places and to capture the mood, such as calm mornings or busy streets, because images help me recall those emotions.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear preference statement, then give two specific reasons with linking words (because, and, so). Use correct adjectives and avoid vague phrases like "how atmosphere peak." Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer views in rural areas because they are peaceful and less noisy. For example, I enjoy photographing fields and rivers since the quiet helps me focus, and the natural light often makes scenes more beautiful.

Sugestão: Answer directly by stating preference or saying you like both, then give specific contrasting reasons using linking words (however, and, because). Correct common errors: use plural/singular appropriately and choose precise adjectives (beautiful, proud).

Exemplo: I like views in both my own country and other countries. In my country I feel proud because familiar landscapes and cultural places remind me of home, while visiting other countries lets me explore new scenes and learn about different architectures and lifestyles.

× Yes, I verily in just a week taking picture of different view, because we have seen many places.

✓ Yes, I usually take pictures of different views every week because I have seen many places.

Original sentence uses incorrect present participle structure and awkward word order ('taking picture') and wrong word choice ('verily', 'in just a week'). Use simple present 'take' for habitual action and plural 'pictures' and 'views'. Replace 'verily' with 'usually' and 'in just a week' with 'every week' to express frequency. Keep 'because we have seen many places' as present perfect to show experience. Suggested improvement: Practice forming habitual sentences with simple present (subject + base verb, add -s for third person) and use plural nouns for countable items (picture -> pictures, view -> views).

× If we go to every umm, everywhere in the country in your world, yes, maybe it's how many emotion when you taking picture in this in this, in that place.

✓ If we go everywhere in the country or around the world, we can feel many emotions when we take pictures in different places.

Original has incorrect and redundant prepositions ('in the country in your world') and wrong verb form 'taking' instead of 'take' for the conditional statement. Also 'how many emotion' is ungrammatical; use 'many emotions' and plural 'places'. Use 'when we take pictures' for regular action and correct preposition 'in different places'. Suggested improvement: Simplify prepositional phrases and use correct verb forms after time clauses (when + subject + verb). Use plural nouns for countable items and avoid redundant words.

× Yes, I like to take view in rural area because it's how atmosphere peak and maybe, uh, it's not noisy, not too very to be able and it's focused on myself is I think see overview is very interesting thing.

✓ Yes, I like to take photos of rural views because the atmosphere is peaceful; it's not noisy and it helps me focus on myself. I think seeing the scenery is very interesting.

Issues: 'take view' should be 'take photos of views' (verb + object and plural), 'in rural area' should be 'in rural areas' or 'in the countryside', and 'how atmosphere peak' is incorrect — use 'the atmosphere is peaceful.' 'not too very' is ungrammatical; use 'not too noisy' or 'not very noisy'. 'focused on myself' is awkward; 'helps me focus on myself' is clearer. 'see overview' should be 'seeing the scenery'. Suggested improvement: Use correct collocations (take photos, rural areas, peaceful atmosphere), choose simpler adjectives and proper comparative structures, and keep noun forms consistent.

× Yes, I like both view in our country and other country because in our country I can see the same thing and I proud of my country because very voices beautiful and I want to go to other country to explore my eye.

✓ Yes, I like views both in my country and in other countries because at home I can see familiar sights and I am proud of my country because it is very beautiful. I also want to visit other countries to broaden my perspective.

Multiple errors: 'both view in our country and other country' needs plural 'views' and 'in my country and in other countries'. 'I can see the same thing' is unclear; 'familiar sights' is better. 'I proud' requires the verb 'am' (be verb). 'very voices beautiful' is nonsensical; replace with 'very beautiful'. 'explore my eye' is incorrect idiomatically; use 'broaden my perspective' or 'expand my horizons'. Suggested improvement: Use correct articles and plurals, include the correct form of the verb 'to be' (I am proud), and choose idiomatic expressions for showing desire to experience other cultures.