Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Cevap doğrudan ve anlaşılır, fakat dilbilgisi hataları, dolgu kelimeleri (uh), sayı kullanımı yanlış ve cümle yapısı eksik. Daha doğal olmak için: (1) dolgu kelimelerinden kaçının, (2) fiil ve isim uyumunu düzeltin (‘take pictures’, ‘collect memories’ yerine ‘collect memories of places’), (3) bir konu cümlesi kurup ardından kısa bir destekleyici detay ekleyin. Örnek bağlaçlar: because, so, and. Ayrıca cevap uzunluğunu 2-3 cümleyle sınırlayın.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because they help me keep memories of the places I visit. For example, I often photograph sunsets and cityscapes so I can remember the atmosphere later.

Sugestão: İfade etmek istediğiniz düşünce açık ancak dil bilgisi ve kelime sırası yanlışları var. (1) ‘prefer views rural areas’ yerine ‘prefer views in rural areas’, (2) ‘they're so natural for me and they are relaxed me’ yerine ‘they feel natural and relax me’ veya ‘they make me feel relaxed’. (3) Dolgu seslerini (umm) çıkarın. Cümleleri bağlamak için because ve so kullanın. Kısa bir örnek ekleyin.

Exemplo: I generally prefer views in rural areas because they feel more natural and they make me feel relaxed. For example, I like photographing fields and forests when I want to unwind.

Sugestão: Cevap net ama tekrarlı ve dolgu sözcükleri var. (1) ‘taking photos from there’ ifadesi yerine ‘taking photos while I am there’, (2) tekrarı azaltın (‘I love that’ yerine bir detay verin), (3) destekleyici örnek veya kısa sebep ekleyin. Bağlaçlar: because, so, for example. Dilbilgisi ve akıcılığı iyileştirin.

Exemplo: I generally prefer views in other countries because I enjoy taking photos while on vacation and discovering new landscapes. For example, I once photographed coastal villages during a trip to Portugal, which was very inspiring.

× Yes, I like taking picture of different views because uh, I like collect 2 memories some places.

✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views because I like to collect memories of some places.

The student used singular 'picture' instead of plural 'pictures' and a wrong word order 'collect 2 memories some places'. Use plural when referring to multiple photos. Use the infinitive 'to collect' after 'like' and the correct preposition 'of' with 'memories'. Also replace '2' with the word 'to' is incorrect; write 'to collect' and not a numeral. Suggestion: say 'taking pictures', 'like to collect', and 'memories of places'. Grammar problem type ID:1

× Generally I prefer views rural areas because umm, they're so natural for me and they are relaxed me.

✓ Generally I prefer views in rural areas because they're so natural for me and they relax me.

The student omitted the preposition 'in' after 'views' and used the incorrect structure 'they are relaxed me'. Use 'in rural areas' to show location. For the second clause, use the active verb 'relax' with the subject 'they' and object 'me' (they relax me), not the adjective 'relaxed'. Also 'they're' contraction is fine but keep consistent. Suggestion: use 'in' for locations and correct verb form 'relax me'. Grammar problem type ID:11

× Generally I prefer views in other countries because, uh, I love vacations and tours and taking photos from there.

✓ Generally I prefer views in other countries because I love vacations and tours and taking photos there.

The phrase 'taking photos from there' uses an unnecessary preposition 'from'. After 'taking photos' use a location adverb 'there' or 'in those places'. Also ensure parallel structure: 'I love vacations, tours, and taking photos there.' Suggestion: remove 'from' and place 'there' after 'photos' or rephrase as 'taking photos in those places'. Grammar problem type ID:8