Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise and avoid contradiction/confusing comparison. Start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give one specific supporting detail and a brief reason. Reduce hesitations and fix grammar (e.g., "involves" → "involve").

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, particularly locations with a classic or timeless look. However, I’m even more interested in photographing people and animals because they bring emotion and movement to the shot, which I find more engaging.

Sugestão: Make the answer direct and reduce fillers ("umm", "uh"). Use one or two clear reasons with specific examples and correct tense/grammar ("it would be" → "it’s"). Keep to max 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer photographing urban views because I’m a city person and feel more comfortable there. For example, city streets, architecture and night lights give me predictable lighting and interesting patterns, whereas rural scenes often require special equipment and longer travel.

Sugestão: Be clearer and correct small errors (e.g., "use it involves" → "that involve"). State a direct preference if possible, then give one specific contrasting reason and an example. Avoid vague phrases like "I guess" to sound more confident.

Exemplo: I like photographing coastal scenes in my country because the beaches and seascapes are familiar and beautiful. But for dramatic mountain landscapes and classical historic architecture, I prefer to shoot abroad since some countries have more preserved historic sites and dramatic alpine scenery.

× But as compared to taking photos that involves people and animals, I'm much more interested in the latter.

✓ But compared to taking photos that involve people and animals, I'm much more interested in the latter.

The verb should agree with the plural noun 'photos'. 'Photos that involve' uses plural subject so 'involve' not 'involves'. Also 'as compared to' is wordy; 'compared to' is more natural. ID:12

× I prefer taking pictures in urban areas 'cause I myself, I'm a city girl and I think taking pictures in rural areas is much more challenging.

✓ I prefer taking pictures in urban areas because I myself am a city girl, and I think taking pictures in rural areas are much more challenging.

Using 'I'm' twice is redundant; 'I myself am' is correct structure. However, 'taking pictures in rural areas' is a gerund phrase treated as plural idea; native preference can use 'is' or 'are' depending on meaning—better to keep 'is' if thought of as an activity. To follow instruction, correct redundancy: replace second 'I'm' with 'am'. Also replace colloquial ''cause' with 'because'. ID:2

× I think it would be easier if I'll just take photos in the cities, umm, especially considering that, uh, the vibe is I'm more familiar.

✓ I think it would be easier if I just took photos in the cities, especially considering that the vibe is one I'm more familiar with.

After 'would be easier if' the conditional clause should use past tense ('I just took') rather than 'I'll' or 'I will'. Also 'the vibe is I'm more familiar' is ungrammatical; use 'the vibe is one I'm more familiar with' to include the preposition 'with'. ID:7

× That's quite a very interesting question as well.

✓ That's a very interesting question as well.

The phrase 'quite a very' is redundant and unidiomatic: use either 'quite a' or 'a very'. This is not strictly a preposition error but fits 'Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs' better; still corrected for natural usage. ID:11

× There are views that I love taking photos in my country, like use it involves the sea and the ocean, but for views that involve mountains and classical historic places, I guess I prefer taking them in other countries.

✓ There are views in my country that I love taking photos of, such as those that involve the sea and the ocean, but for views that involve mountains and classical historic places, I guess I prefer taking them in other countries.

Word order and pronoun/reference issues: 'taking photos in my country' is awkward; 'views in my country that I love taking photos of' is clearer. 'Like use it involves' is incorrect; replace with 'such as those that involve'. Also maintain consistent 'involve' for plural 'views'. ID:12