Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more concise, fluent and grammatically correct. Start with a clear topic sentence, remove fillers and hesitations, correct verb forms, and add one brief supporting detail using a linking word. For example, replace repetitions with a single clear reason and give a specific instance.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views when I travel because they help me remember places and moments. For example, last summer I photographed the coastline to recall the light and colours of the sunset.

Sugestão: Improve accuracy and fluency by avoiding minor repetitions and by using linking words for coherence. Keep the answer within 2–4 sentences, correct small grammar errors (e.g., 'a small village near a river'), and give a specific sensory detail to enrich the response.

Exemplo: I mostly prefer rural views because they offer beautiful natural scenery and a peaceful atmosphere. For example, last weekend I visited a friend’s house in a small village by a river, and I enjoyed the fresh air and the sound of birds.

Sugestão: Make the answer complete, avoid trailing off, and improve noun phrases (e.g., 'mountain forests' or 'mountains and forests'). Use one linking phrase to explain why you prefer your country and finish with a specific intention or example.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because it has diverse landscapes like mountains, forests, gardens and sandy beaches, which feel familiar and relaxing. Therefore, I plan to travel across my country to visit waterfalls and coastal towns next year.

× I like to take picture of different views whenever I travel, I'd like to take pictures because it help I, it helps me to SH it helps me to uh, remember where I go, uh, where I go and when I send.

✓ I like to take pictures of different views whenever I travel. I'd like to take pictures because it helps me to remember where I go and when I went.

Errors: 'picture' should be plural 'pictures' (singular/plural issue), and 'help I' is incorrect word order and form; correct is 'helps me' (third person singular agreement). The phrase 'where I go and when I send' is unclear; likely intended 'where I go and when I went' or 'where I went' depending on meaning. I corrected to 'when I went' to match past events remembered. Suggestions: use plural for countable nouns when referring to multiple items, ensure subject-verb agreement (he/she/it + verb+s), and keep verb tenses consistent (use past tense 'went' when referring to past trips). Use simple, clear sentence breaks to avoid run-on sentences.

× Mostly I prefer rural areas because they offer beautiful, elegant natural scenery and peaceful atmosphere.

✓ Mostly I prefer rural areas because they offer beautiful, elegant natural scenery and a peaceful atmosphere.

Error: missing article 'a' before 'peaceful atmosphere' (incorrect use of articles/prepositions). Suggestion: use the indefinite article 'a' with singular, countable noun phrases like 'a peaceful atmosphere' to make the noun phrase grammatically correct.

× As an example, last weekend I visited a friend's home in a small village near river and really I really enjoyed the fresh air, the quiet surroundings, all.

✓ As an example, last weekend I visited a friend's home in a small village near a river, and I really enjoyed the fresh air and the quiet surroundings.

Errors: missing article before 'river' ('near a river'), redundant repetition 'really I really', and awkward ending 'all'. Suggestions: include the article 'a' with 'river', remove duplicate words, and combine phrases with proper conjunctions and commas for clarity.

× Mostly I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes such as mountain forest, gardens, sandy beaches, waterfalls and beautiful coastlines, and the overall atmosphere is very peaceful.

✓ Mostly I prefer views in my own country because it offers a wide variety of landscapes, such as mountains, forests, gardens, sandy beaches, waterfalls, and beautiful coastlines, and the overall atmosphere is very peaceful.

Errors: list items 'mountain forest' should be pluralized and separated ('mountains, forests') and commas needed between items. Use plural nouns for types of landscapes. Suggestions: pluralize countable nouns when referring to general categories and separate items with commas for a clear list.

× And I would like to travel all around my country because.

✓ I would like to travel all around my country.

Error: sentence ends with 'because' causing an incomplete clause (sentence structure error). Suggestion: remove 'because' or complete the clause with a reason. In this correction, 'because' was removed to form a complete, grammatical sentence.