Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and enthusiastic, but has grammatical errors, some redundancy, and a few unnatural phrases. Keep it concise (max 5 sentences), start with a direct topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct verb forms and natural connectors (because, so, which).

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views, especially when I travel. I find it rewarding because it captures scenes I have never seen before, and later the photos remind me of memorable moments from the trip. For example, I often photograph landscapes at sunrise to preserve the colours and mood.

Sugestão: The response communicates a preference but is incomplete and contains grammar mistakes and awkward phrasing. Provide a clear topic sentence, finish your thought, and give a specific reason or brief example. Use linking words (because, so, although) and correct word forms (stressful → stressed or it makes me feel relaxed).

Exemplo: I prefer rural views to urban ones because I live in a city with many tall buildings and concrete blocks. Being in the countryside makes me feel relaxed, as I can enjoy open fields and fresh air, which is a welcome contrast to the busy urban environment.

Sugestão: You answer conveys interest in foreign views but uses informal and incorrect language (gonna makes, my countries). Keep it concise, use correct grammar, and give a specific reason or brief example (e.g., cultural differences, historical sites). Use linking words (because, and) to connect ideas coherently.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they often offer different landscapes and cultural landmarks that I cannot see at home. For example, visiting historic sites in Europe made me appreciate local history and architecture, which felt both refreshing and educational.

× It's very enjoyable to taking these pictures for the sceneries I have never seen before 'cause it's gonna remind me that good trip and some unforgettable memories every time.

✓ It's very enjoyable to take these pictures of scenery I have never seen before because they will remind me of a good trip and some unforgettable memories every time.

The pattern 'to' + verb requires the base form (infinitive), not the -ing form (Grammar Problem Type 8). Use 'to take' instead of 'to taking'. Also use 'of scenery' instead of 'for the sceneries' (preposition and noun choice), change colloquial 'gonna' to 'will' (register and future tense), and make pronoun and article agreement: 'they will remind me of a good trip and some unforgettable memories.' Suggestions: use infinitive after 'to', prefer 'of' with 'pictures', avoid informal 'gonna', and match plural pronoun 'they' to 'these pictures'.

× I like taking pictures for the different views especially when I'm traveling.

✓ I like taking pictures of different views, especially when I'm traveling.

Use 'pictures of' rather than 'pictures for' when indicating what the pictures show (Grammar Problem Type 11). Also remove the extra article 'the' before 'different views' unless referring to specific views. Suggestion: use 'pictures of' and add a comma before 'especially'.

× It's very enjoyable to taking these pictures for the sceneries I have never seen before 'cause it's gonna remind me that good trip and some unforgettable memories every time.

✓ It's very enjoyable to take these pictures of scenery I have never seen before because they will remind me of a good trip and some unforgettable memories every time.

Article and noun use is incorrect (Grammar Problem Type 22). 'The sceneries' is unnatural; use 'scenery' as an uncountable noun or 'scenes'/'views' as countable. Use 'a good trip' (indefinite article) and 'some unforgettable memories' is fine. Suggestion: choose the correct noun form and use appropriate articles: 'a good trip' and 'scenery' or 'views'.

× I feel stressful living in the urban places, but when I'm working in the rural areas, the beautiful sceneries and.

✓ I feel stressed living in urban areas, but when I work in rural areas, the beautiful scenery helps me relax.

The sentence is incomplete and uses an incorrect adjective 'stressful' to describe a person (Grammar Problem Type 16). 'Stressful' describes situations; use 'stressed' for a person's feeling. Also the clause 'the beautiful sceneries and.' is a sentence fragment—sentence structure error (Grammar Problem Type 26). Suggestion: use 'stressed' and complete the idea, e.g., 'the beautiful scenery helps me relax.'

× For me, I prefer the views in rural areas 'cause I live in the cities which are surrounded by the high buildings and blocks.

✓ For me, I prefer the views in rural areas because I live in a city surrounded by tall buildings and blocks.

There is a mismatch and awkward pluralization (Grammar Problem Type 1). 'I live in the cities' is incorrect if the speaker lives in one city; use 'a city' or 'the city' depending on meaning. 'High buildings' is less natural than 'tall buildings.' Suggestion: use singular 'a city' and 'tall buildings' for natural collocation.

× I enjoy the views in the different countries, not only my countries but also the other countries cause the different views gonna makes me refreshing and remind me some of the good things and learn the history of these countries, I think it's very interesting.

✓ I enjoy views in different countries, not only my country but also other countries, because different views make me feel refreshed, remind me of good things, and help me learn the history of those countries; I think it's very interesting.

Multiple issues: 'gonna' is informal and incorrect for written future/modal use (Grammar Problem Type 4). 'gonna makes' is ungrammatical—subject-verb agreement and modal misuse. Use present simple 'make' for general truths (Grammar Problem Type 6) or 'help me' for purpose. Also 'my countries' is wrong if speaker means their country (Grammar Problem Type 1), and 'remind me some of the good things' needs 'remind me of good things' (preposition error, Type 11). Suggestion: avoid 'gonna', use correct verb forms ('make', 'remind me of'), use singular 'country' or plural consistently, and break the long sentence into clearer clauses.

× For me I enjoy the views in the different countries, not only my countries but also the other countries cause the different views gonna makes me refreshing and remind me some of the good things and learn the history of these countries, I think it's very interesting.

✓ I enjoy views in different countries, not only my country but also other countries, because different views make me feel refreshed, remind me of good things, and help me learn the history of those countries; I think it's very interesting.

Pronoun and determiner use is inconsistent and incorrect (Grammar Problem Type 12). 'My countries' and 'the other countries' are awkward; use 'my country' and 'other countries' or 'those countries' for clarity. Also pronoun references must match noun number (use 'those countries' for plural). Suggestion: choose consistent singular/plural forms and referents.

× it's gonna remind me that good trip and some unforgettable memories every time.

✓ they will remind me of a good trip and some unforgettable memories every time.

The original uses 'gonna' (informal future) and mixes tense/number causing awkwardness (Grammar Problem Type 5). Use 'will' for future and ensure plural 'they' matches 'pictures' (subject-verb agreement). Also use 'remind me of' not 'remind me that.' Suggestion: use 'will remind me of' and match subject and verb number.