Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve naturalness and specificity. Start with a concise topic sentence, avoid slightly formal words like “recording” in this context, and add one specific detail about how or why you photograph sunsets (e.g., camera type, time of day, or particular season). Use a linking phrase to connect the reason and example. Keep to a maximum of 3–4 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes — I love taking photos of different views because they help me remember special moments. For example, I often shoot sunsets with my phone camera in late summer when the sky turns orange, and I save the best ones in an album to compare how they change through the seasons.

Sugestão: Good direct answer with reasons, but improve grammar and coherence. Use a clear topic sentence, correct comparative phrasing (“quieter and more relaxing than a busy city”), and add a brief specific example (a place, sound, or activity) to enrich the response. Use a linking word (e.g., “because” or “for example”) to connect ideas smoothly. Keep sentences concise.

Exemplo: I prefer rural views because I enjoy natural scenery such as rolling hills and forests. For example, walking in the countryside near my hometown is quieter and more relaxing than being in a busy city, and I especially like listening to birds and breathing fresh air.

Sugestão: Your idea is good, but there are grammatical errors and an unclear phrase (“serve on sea”) that reduce clarity. Provide a clear topic sentence, correct vocabulary (e.g., “coast” or “seaside”), and give one precise example of a place or region. Use linking words like “for example” and fix article use and word order. Keep to 2–3 concise sentences.

Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because China offers very diverse landscapes from mountains to coastlines. For example, I enjoy the snow-capped peaks in the north and the peaceful seaside scenery in the south.

× The landscapes are beautiful and peaceful and I find the fresh air quiet and relaxing than a busy city.

✓ The landscapes are beautiful and peaceful, and I find the fresh air quieter and more relaxing than that of a busy city.

This sentence has comparison issues and incorrect adjective/adverb forms. 'Quiet' should be comparative 'quieter' when comparing two things, and 'relaxing' needs a parallel comparative structure 'more relaxing'. Also include 'that of' to compare the air of the city and add a comma before the coordinating conjunction for clarity.

× For example, I can enjoy the snow capped peaks in the northern part of China and I can also serve on sea in the another part of China.

✓ For example, I can enjoy the snow-capped peaks in the northern part of China, and I can also see the sea in another part of China.

This sentence contains word choice and structure errors. 'Snow capped' should be hyphenated as 'snow-capped' when used as a compound adjective. 'Serve on sea' is incorrect; the intended verb is likely 'see'. 'The another part' is ungrammatical; use 'another part' without the definite article. Adding a comma before 'and' improves readability.