Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Give a clear, present-tense topic sentence, avoid filler words (uh, umm), and add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep it natural and within 3–4 sentences. For example, mention when or where you take photos and what you like about those views.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph mountains at sunrise because the light makes the peaks look dramatic. I also like close-up shots of tea leaves in gardens since the textures are very detailed.

Sugestão: Start with a direct preference statement, avoid hesitations, and give two specific reasons with linking words (because, for example). Mention particular urban features you enjoy photographing to make the answer concrete and concise.

Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I love the energy and architecture of cities. For example, I enjoy photographing busy streets and modern malls in Jakarta because the contrasts of lights and buildings create interesting compositions.

Sugestão: Answer directly and avoid fillers. Give a clear reason and a specific example of a foreign view you like, using linking words to explain why. If you mention a place or cultural feature, use correct names and briefly describe what attracts you there.

Exemplo: I prefer views in other countries because they offer new cultural scenery and architecture. For example, I like Japan for its traditional temples and cherry blossoms, which create peaceful and picturesque scenes that are different from those at home.

× Yes, I really loved taking pictures of different views.

✓ Yes, I really love taking pictures of different views.

The question asks about a general preference (Do you like...), so present simple should be used. 'Loved' is past tense and implies a finished action. Use 'love' to indicate a current, ongoing preference.

× I loved taking pictures of uh, mountain or umm, uh, tea leaves, the tea leaves or umm.

✓ I love taking pictures of mountains or tea leaves.

The original is repetitive and mixes singular/plural forms. For general habits use present tense 'love' and plural 'mountains' when speaking generally. Remove filler words for clarity and combine items with 'or' correctly.

× I prefer in urban areas feels because I love city and I love to go to Jakarta and taking pictures of, uh, of road or of umm mall or.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I love the city, I like going to Jakarta, and taking pictures of roads and malls.

Several issues: incorrect phrase 'prefer in urban areas feels' and missing articles. Use 'prefer urban areas' (no 'in' needed). Use 'the city' for a general noun and 'going to' for habitual actions. 'Taking' should be parallel with 'like going' — use 'and taking' but better to make verbs parallel: 'I like going to Jakarta and taking pictures'. Use plural 'roads' and 'malls' for general items and remove fillers.

× I prefer in urban areas feels because I love city and I love to go to Jakarta and taking pictures of, uh, of road or of umm mall or.

✓ I prefer urban areas because I love the city and I like to go to Jakarta to take pictures of roads and malls.

Prepositions and infinitive forms were incorrect: remove 'in' after 'prefer' and use 'to take' (infinitive) rather than 'taking' after 'to'. Use articles where needed: 'the city' and plural nouns for general statements.

× Of course, I love the views in other countries.

✓ Of course, I love the views in other countries.

This sentence is already correct in present simple to express a general preference, so no change is necessary.

× I like to, uh, I like Japan and I love the, uh, Chahaya. Hmm.

✓ I like Japan and I love its scenery.

The original is disfluent and unclear ('I like to, uh, I like Japan' and 'Chahaya' is unclear). For clarity, state the country preference and refer to 'scenery' or 'landscapes' instead of an unclear term. Use present simple 'like' and 'love' for current preferences.