Views— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Speak more clearly and avoid hesitations and filler words (e.g., "uh", "um"). Begin with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Use correct verb forms and concise phrasing to improve naturalness and coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy taking photos of different views. For example, I often photograph sunrises and snowy mountains because their colors and textures are striking. Also, I like sharing selected shots on social media to get feedback from friends.

Sugestão: Start with a direct statement of preference, then give a specific reason and an example. Reduce hesitations and correct small grammar errors (e.g., "I prefer rural areas", "when I get the chance"). Use one linking word to connect ideas (e.g., "because", "so").

Exemplo: I prefer rural areas to urban ones because the countryside feels calm and relaxing. For instance, when I visit a village I photograph fields and streams to capture peaceful atmospheres.

Sugestão: Give a clear, direct answer first (e.g., "I don't have a strong preference"). Avoid repeating and fix grammar (e.g., "it depends on time and mood"). Provide one concrete example to support your answer and use a linking phrase like "however" or "for example".

Exemplo: I don't have a strong preference; it depends on my time and mood. For example, when I travel abroad I photograph famous landmarks, but at home I often focus on local parks and streetscapes.

× I really love to take pictures of different places be uh, for example, the sunset, sunrise, snowy mountains, etcetera.

✓ I really love taking pictures of different places, for example the sunset, sunrise, snowy mountains, etcetera.

After verbs of liking (love) when referring to activities, use the gerund (verb + -ing) rather than the infinitive with to. Also removed extraneous filler and corrected word order and punctuation for clarity.

× Actually, I love to pour sharing picture on social media with my friends and I try to capture from different angles and different lighting, which makes.

✓ Actually, I love sharing pictures on social media with my friends, and I try to capture them from different angles and in different lighting, which makes them more interesting.

Replace the incorrect phrase 'pour sharing' with the gerund 'sharing' and use plural 'pictures'. Use object 'them' to refer back to pictures. Use prepositions 'from' and 'in' correctly and complete the clause 'which makes them more interesting' to finish the sentence.

× Although the cities have beautiful views to capture UMM, I will prefer the rural areas because I love the calming and relaxing nature.

✓ Although cities have beautiful views to capture, I prefer rural areas because I love the calming, relaxing nature.

'I will prefer' is incorrect for general preference; use simple present 'I prefer'. Also 'the cities' and 'the rural areas' can be generalized without articles. Commas improve adjective listing ('calming, relaxing'). Removed filler 'UMM'.

× So whenever I get chance I usually capture a pictures in.

✓ So whenever I get the chance, I usually take pictures.

Use the article 'the' with 'chance' and plural 'pictures' without the extraneous preposition 'in'. Use the verb 'take pictures' which is the standard collocation.

× Will I prefer boat uh in local and in the foreign country as well? Umm it just depend on time and my mood.

✓ I prefer both local and foreign places; it just depends on time and my mood.

Questions form 'Will I prefer' is inappropriate; state preference in simple present. 'Boat' appears to be misused and was removed. Use 'depends' third-person singular agreement with subject implied ('it'). Use 'both local and foreign places' for clarity.

× Sometimes I get chance to go to the different countries and out of my country to.

✓ Sometimes I get the chance to travel to different countries outside my own.

Add article 'the' before 'chance', use verb 'travel to' for going to countries, use 'different countries' (no 'the'), and replace the awkward phrase 'out of my country to' with 'outside my own' for natural English.