Part 1
Examinador
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Candidato
Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views. First of all taking pictures of different views makes me happy because I like taking pictures and another reason is the views can makes me happy and have a good mood. So I do you like this reaction?
Examinador
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Candidato
I prefer the views in urban areas because I born in the urban and very used to it and another reason is there are many people in the urban areas and they are made me safe, give me a feeling of safe.
Examinador
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Candidato
I prefer the views in my own country because the first reason is I lived there and I used to the view of the country and another reason is my country is big and it include various kind of views I need.
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
Pontuação: 58.0Sugestão: 用更自然、简洁的句子直接回答问题,避免重复并修正语法错误;用一到两句支持细节并使用连接词使结构清晰。例如说明具体喜欢拍摄什么类型的景色和拍照带来的感受。注意不要把问题反问考官。
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. Mainly I like landscapes because they make me feel relaxed, and taking photos helps me capture memories and improve my composition skills.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
Pontuação: 54.0Sugestão: 回答要更直接并改正语法错误,使用连词解释原因并给出具体细节(例如城市的哪些景象或设施让你感觉安全)。避免重复表达“安全”。
Exemplo: I prefer urban views because I grew up in the city and feel comfortable there. For instance, busy streets, well-lit parks and nearby shops make me feel safe and offer interesting scenes to photograph.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
Pontuação: 60.0Sugestão: 回答时用更准确的时态和词语,先给出直接结论,再用具体细节支持(如列举几种本国的景色类型),并用连接词让表达更连贯。避免笼统表述“我习惯”重复出现。
Exemplo: I prefer views in my own country because I know the places well and feel a strong connection to them. For example, my country has diverse scenery, from coastal beaches to mountain ranges, so I can find many different subjects to photograph.
× Yes, I do like taking pictures of different views.
✓ Yes, I like taking pictures of different views.
句子原本使用了“do like”强调,一般陈述句直接用“like”更自然。虽然“do like”并非完全错误,但在此上下文中冗余且不符合口语习惯。建议:对一般现在时的喜好和常态使用简单现在时(主语 + like/likes)。
× First of all taking pictures of different views makes me happy because I like taking pictures and another reason is the views can makes me happy and have a good mood.
✓ First of all, taking pictures of different views makes me happy because I enjoy photography. Another reason is that the views can make me feel happy and put me in a good mood.
句子存在结构混乱和动词形式错误。“can makes”中动词不定式应为原形“make”。“have a good mood”搭配不当,应使用“feel happy / be in a good mood”。建议:使用清晰的并列句,确保情态动词后用动词原形,使用恰当的固定搭配。
× So I do you like this reaction?
✓ So do you like this reaction?
该句语序错误,疑问句需用助动词“do”放在主语前构成一般疑问句。原句把“do”放在主句中导致不通顺。建议:构造一般疑问句时使用“Do + 主语 + 动词原形 + 其他”。
× I prefer the views in urban areas because I born in the urban and very used to it and another reason is there are many people in the urban areas and they are made me safe, give me a feeling of safe.
✓ I prefer views in urban areas because I was born in a city and am very used to it. Another reason is that there are many people in urban areas, and they make me feel safe.
原句中代词和被动/时态使用错误:“I born”缺少助动词,应为“was born”。“very used to it”需与“am”连用。短语“they are made me safe”结构错误,应为“they make me feel safe”。“a feeling of safe”搭配错误,应为“feel safe”或“a feeling of safety”。建议:注意被动表达的正确形式(was/were born),以及动词短语的搭配和时态一致性。
× I prefer the views in my own country because the first reason is I lived there and I used to the view of the country and another reason is my country is big and it include various kind of views I need.
✓ I prefer the views in my own country because I have lived there and am used to the country's scenery. Another reason is that my country is big and it includes various kinds of views I need.
原句时态和动词搭配不当。“I lived there”暗示过去事实,用于表达仍然居住或经历到现在应使用现在完成时“have lived”。“I used to the view”结构错误,应为“am used to the view/scenery”。“it include”主谓不一致,应为“it includes”。“various kind”数与名词形式需调整为“various kinds”或“various kinds of”。建议:根据语境选择合适时态(现在完成时表示过去持续到现在的情况),确保主谓一致,使用固定搭配“be used to + 名词”。