Part 1
Examinador
Do you like chatting with friends?
Candidato
I like to chatting with my friends, umm, where there are a lot of thing we usually talk about umm, kind of pets or living in a house, like studying in the school, uh, still other things we talk about.
Examinador
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Candidato
I usually chat with my friend like pets, like family or study because we are both student and where a lot of comments point we don't like the school or we meet a new new people in the.
Examinador
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Candidato
I prefer to chat with a group of people, umm, I guess when, when, when we chat, I I chatted with group of people. There are umm, uh, ver very unusual thoughts. I never mean before. That makes me feel more.
Examinador
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Candidato
I like to communicate with the social media. When we use social media, they're not only the face muscle and the body language we use. And actually that will make me feel nervous and I can't, but social media is.
Examinador
Do you argue with friends?
Candidato
Sometime I argue with my friend because we have some opposite opinion and we almost fight but we fix it together like we both say sorry and or mind or self.
Do you like chatting with friends?
Pontuação: 55.0Sugestão: 回答要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。控制句子长度(不超过5句),减少犹豫词(umm, uh),并用连接词组织细节。例如先给出主题句,然后用一两句话补充具体话题或原因。注意动词形式(like to chat, not like to chatting)。
Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends. We often talk about our pets, school life and daily routines, which helps us relax and share advice.
What do you usually chat about with friends?
Pontuação: 50.0Sugestão: 回答应更具体并语法正确。先给出概括(topic sentence),然后用连接词(for example, because, so)列举具体话题并说明原因或举例。避免重复词(new new)和不完整句子。
Exemplo: We usually talk about pets, our families and studies, because as students we often share school experiences and complain about teachers or discuss new classmates.
Do you prefer to chat with a group of people or with only one friend?
Pontuação: 45.0Sugestão: 回答要更简洁并表达清楚原因。避免重复和填充词,限定句子数量并用连接词说明理由。可以给出具体例子说明“不同的想法”如何带来好处。
Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because hearing different opinions often gives me new ideas and makes conversations more fun and lively.
Do you prefer to communicate face-to-face or via social media?
Pontuação: 48.0Sugestão: 回答需更明确且语法正确。先说明偏好,再解释原因并用完整句子。区分身体语言(body language)和面对面交流的影响,避免未完成的句子。
Exemplo: I prefer communicating via social media because I feel less nervous without face-to-face body language, and it gives me more time to think before replying.
Do you argue with friends?
Pontuação: 52.0Sugestão: 回答要更清晰地描述频率、原因和解决方式。使用连接词(because, but, so)来组织句子,并用准确表达说明如何和好(apologize, make up)。避免模糊词语(or mind or self)。
Exemplo: Sometimes I argue with friends because we have different opinions, but we usually resolve it by apologizing and talking things through calmly.
× I like to chatting with my friends, umm, where there are a lot of thing we usually talk about umm, kind of pets or living in a house, like studying in the school, uh, still other things we talk about.
✓ I like chatting with my friends, where there are a lot of things we usually talk about, such as pets, living in a house, studying at school, and other topics.
错误类型:动词后接-ing形式或不定式选择错误。说明:在英语中,动词“like”后可以接动名词(doing)或不定式(to do),但不能混用“to chatting”。此外,名词复数应使用“things”,学校前通常用介词“at”。建议:使用“I like chatting...”或“I like to chat...”,并将复数和介词修正为“things”和“at school”。(简体中文)
× I like to chatting with my friends, umm, where there are a lot of thing we usually talk about umm, kind of pets or living in a house, like studying in the school, uh, still other things we talk about.
✓ I like chatting with my friends, where there are a lot of things we usually talk about, such as pets, living in a house, studying at school, and other topics.
错误类型:单复数错误。说明:原句中使用了单数“thing”,但语境表示多项话题,应该用复数“things”。建议:将“thing”改为“things”。(简体中文)
× like studying in the school
✓ studying at school
错误类型:介词使用错误。说明:表示在学校学习通常用介词“at”,而不是“in the school”(后者强调在校舍内部,通常不用于一般表述)。建议:使用“studying at school”。(简体中文)},{