Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the response more concise and correct small grammar issues. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one specific supporting detail. Avoid repeating words (e.g., "like" and "try"). Use linking words for coherence.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends because it helps me share memories and practise English. For example, since I moved to Australia, I often speak English with local friends to improve my confidence and vocabulary.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and one specific detail. Correct grammar (use "restaurants I visit" and avoid awkward phrases like "delicious food"). Use a linking phrase for the example.

Exemplo: I usually chat about food and restaurants I visit. For instance, yesterday I recommended a famous Japanese restaurant that serves very tasty ramen and tempura.

Sugestão: Make the preference statement concise and avoid repetition. Provide a specific reason and an example using a linking word.

Exemplo: I prefer talking one-on-one because it’s easier to form a deeper connection. For example, when I speak with a single friend I can focus on their feelings and have a more meaningful conversation.

Sugestão: Correct grammar and clarify the final sentence. Keep it to two to three sentences, explain the reason with a specific example, and remove unclear fragments like "I think I was."

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because I can read facial expressions and body language. For example, if a friend looks angry I can notice it immediately and ask if they are okay.

Sugestão: State the main idea briefly and give one clear, specific example without repeating. Correct phrasing like "political issues in Japan" and avoid redundancy.

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue about topics like political issues in Japan or methods to improve our English. For example, yesterday we debated recent political reforms in Japan and different ways to practice speaking more effectively.

× For example, now I'm in Australia, so I try to talk with a lot of friends in English and try to express.

✓ For example, now I'm in Australia, so I try to talk with a lot of friends in English and try to express myself.

The verb 'express' here needs a reflexive object 'myself' to be grammatically correct and complete. Without it the sentence is missing an object. Add 'myself' to clarify who is doing the expressing.

× I usually talk about my favorite food or the restaurant which I visit.

✓ I usually talk about my favorite food or the restaurants which I visit.

The original uses singular 'the restaurant' but then implies a general habit (visiting more than one). Change to plural 'restaurants' to match the habitual meaning (singular/plural agreement). Also 'which I visit' is grammatically acceptable but 'that I visit' or 'I visit' without 'which' is more natural.

× For example, yesterday I talked about the Japanese restaurant which is very famous and delicious food.

✓ For example, yesterday I talked about a Japanese restaurant that is very famous and has delicious food.

The original mixes 'the Japanese restaurant' with a general description and then uses 'delicious food' without a verb. Use 'a' because you are mentioning one restaurant among many, use 'that' (or 'which') for the relative clause, and add 'has' to connect 'delicious food' correctly.

× I prefer to talk with only one friend because it's easier to make a strong connection with my friends.

✓ I prefer to talk with only one friend because it's easier to make a strong connection with that friend.

The sentence is inconsistent: 'only one friend' is singular but then refers back to 'my friends' (plural). Replace the plural pronoun with 'that friend' (or 'him/her') to maintain number agreement.

× I usually talk with one or two people together and talk and express ourselves more.

✓ I usually talk with one or two people and express ourselves more.

The phrase 'together' is redundant when you already say 'with one or two people', and repeating 'talk and express' is repetitive. Simplify to a single clear verb phrase. Also 'ourselves' is fine if referring to mutual expression.

× I like to communicate face to face better than social media because I can easily find what they are talking about by seeing their facial expressions, for example, when they looks angry.

✓ I like to communicate face to face rather than via social media because I can easily understand what they are talking about by seeing their facial expressions, for example, when they look angry.

Use 'rather than' or 'better than via' for comparison and 'via social media' is more natural than 'social media' alone. 'Find what they are talking about' is better phrased as 'understand what they are talking about'. Verb agreement: 'they looks' is incorrect; use 'they look'.

× I think I was.

✓ I think so.

'I think I was' is incomplete and unclear in this context. The speaker likely wants to agree with the previous statement, so 'I think so' is the appropriate, concise response.

× Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially about politics in Japan or how to improve our English skills.

✓ Yes, I sometimes argue with my friends, especially about politics in Japan or about how to improve our English skills.

The sentence is largely correct but benefits from parallel structure by adding 'about' before the second topic. No modal or past tense change needed; this is an improvement for clarity and parallelism.

× But for example, yesterday I talked about our political problem in Japan.

✓ For example, yesterday I talked about political problems in Japan.

Use plural 'political problems' for a general issue and remove redundant 'But' at the start. The past tense 'talked' is appropriate; adjust nouns to be natural and idiomatic.