Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Improve grammar and clarity: use correct verb forms and vocabulary, and be more specific. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add one or two concise details. For example, say when and where you chat and what platform you use.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my close friends. I usually chat with them every evening on Instagram about my day and small personal updates.

Sugestão: Be specific and correct word choice: use 'daily' not 'dairy' and give concrete examples of topics. Structure with a topic sentence then 1–2 supporting details using linking words.

Exemplo: I usually talk about daily life, such as work, school, and recent events. For example, we often discuss what happened during the day and share funny moments.

Sugestão: Fix sentence structure and remove fillers. Give a clear reason and a supporting detail with linking words. Avoid repetition and incorrect comparative forms.

Exemplo: I prefer talking one-on-one because it allows deeper conversations. For instance, in a private chat I can discuss personal issues more openly and get focused feedback.

Sugestão: Use clearer language and correct vocabulary (e.g., 'connect deeply' not 'connect debris'). Provide a brief reason and an example. Keep sentences concise and coherent.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it helps build stronger connections. For example, meeting in person lets you read facial expressions and tone, which makes communication clearer.

Sugestão: Answer directly and give specific examples. Use correct verbs ('argue with') and list 1–2 topics clearly without hesitation. Support with a brief explanation or consequence.

Exemplo: Yes, I sometimes argue with friends about topics like politics or business. For example, we disagree about government policies, but we usually resolve it by listening to each other's views.

× I usually chatting about daily dies on Instagram.

✓ I usually chat about daily life on Instagram.

The verb 'chatting' is incorrect after 'usually' because a base verb is needed for simple present habitual actions (grammar type 8). Also 'dies' is a misspelling; context requires the noun 'life'. Use 'usually chat' to show habitual action: 'I usually chat about daily life on Instagram.' Suggestion: Use the base form after adverbs of frequency (I usually + verb).

× I usually chat about dairy stories, what happened with the close friends?

✓ I usually chat about daily stories and what happened with my close friends.

'dairy' is a wrong word; 'daily' is correct for everyday events (treated as grammar type 13). The sentence structure mixing a statement and a question is inconsistent. Replace comma with 'and' and use 'my close friends' for natural reference. Suggestion: Use 'daily' for everyday and keep consistent sentence type: either a statement or a question.

× I prefer to chat to with the only one friend because.

✓ I prefer to chat with only one friend because...

The student used redundant prepositions 'to with' and an awkward determiner 'the only one friend' (grammar type 11). Use 'chat with' and 'only one friend' for natural expression. Also the sentence was incomplete; add reason after 'because' when speaking. Suggestion: Use 'chat with' and avoid double prepositions, complete the clause after 'because'.

× It one to one conversation, uh, more deeply, more deeper and, uh, cloud communication.

✓ It is a one-to-one conversation, which is deeper and more personal than group communication.

Several issues: missing verb 'is', missing articles, incorrect comparative 'more deeper' (double comparative) and unclear 'cloud communication' (likely meant 'group' or 'online') (grammar type 13). Use 'one-to-one' as a compound adjective, include 'a' and 'is', and use correct comparative 'deeper' or 'more personal'. Suggestion: Say 'It is a one-to-one conversation, which is deeper and more personal than group communication.'

× I prefer to communicate face to face, uh, which, uh, it's uh, better than online communication to connect debris.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face because it is better than online communication for making connections.

Awkward clause 'which, it's' and wrong preposition 'to connect debris' (likely meant 'to connect people' or 'for making connections') (grammar type 11). Use 'because' to link reasons, 'it is' as the verb, and 'for making connections' or 'for connecting with others'. Suggestion: Use clear connectors and correct prepositions: 'because it is better than online communication for making connections.'

× Yeah, I err with, uh, my friend for example. Uh, such as politics and, uh, business and, uh.

✓ Yes, I argue with my friends sometimes about topics such as politics and business.

The student used 'err' (wrong verb), fragmented fillers and incomplete list (grammar type 26). Use 'argue with' as the correct phrasal verb, plural 'friends' if general, and complete the list. Suggestion: Say 'Yes, I argue with my friends sometimes about topics such as politics and business.'