Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Make the answer more concise and fluent: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce repetition, and add a brief specific example of what you talk about or who you call. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' correctly and avoid filler words and hesitations.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my childhood friends. I usually call them when I’m tired because talking helps me relax and forget stress. For example, last week I called my friend after a long workday and we chatted for an hour, which made me feel much better.

Sugestão: Respond directly with a topic sentence and give specific details. Avoid repeating phrases and explain briefly why the topic matters, using linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas.

Exemplo: We mainly talk about our future plans, such as careers and education, because we are immigrants and uncertain about job opportunities. For instance, we discuss possible cities to live in and advise each other on courses or job applications to stay motivated.

Sugestão: Give a clear preference sentence, then support it with concise reasons and one short example. Avoid repetition and grammatical errors (e.g., subject-verb agreement and possessives).

Exemplo: I prefer chatting in a group because people share different points of view and offer more encouragement. For example, when we plan projects together, several ideas come up and that helps me choose the best option.

Sugestão: State your preference clearly, give two specific reasons, and avoid fillers. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly and give a brief example of a face-to-face interaction.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can see facial expressions and body language, which helps understanding. For example, when I meet a friend in person, I can tell if they are upset and offer support more easily than through messages.

Sugestão: Answer directly and clarify the context. Avoid absolute statements like 'all my friends' unless accurate. Give a brief specific example and explain how arguments end (e.g., jokingly or seriously).

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue, mainly about sports when we support different teams. For example, during the last football match my friends and I debated loudly about a referee decision, but we laughed afterwards and the disagreement didn’t last.

× Yes I do like chatting with my friends.

✓ Yes, I like chatting with my friends.

Unnecessary use of auxiliary 'do' in affirmative present simple sentences. Use simple present 'I like' for habitual actions.

× So I had childhood friends and when I feel tired and when I when I feel exhausted then I chat with my friends.

✓ I have childhood friends, and when I feel tired or exhausted I chat with them.

Incorrect tense 'had' conflicts with meaning (use present 'have'). Repetition and redundant phrases removed; use 'or' to combine 'tired' and 'exhausted' and pronoun 'them' for friends.

× So then after the after a chat with my friends I I feel stress free and relax.

✓ After chatting with my friends I feel stress-free and relaxed.

Awkward repetition and article misuse removed. Use gerund 'chatting' to indicate the action, hyphenate 'stress-free' and use adjective 'relaxed' to describe state.

× I usually chat about with my friends on a topic of my future.

✓ I usually chat with my friends about my future.

Incorrect preposition order ('chat about with' is wrong). Correct pattern is 'chat with someone about something'; also simplify 'on a topic of' to 'about'.

× As we are an immigrant so we we we are worried about our future so we often we often chat about our future so that's we motivate each other.

✓ As we are immigrants, we are worried about our future, so we often talk about it and motivate each other.

Singular/plural error: 'an immigrant' should be plural 'immigrants' to match 'we'. Remove repetitions and use 'talk about it' for clarity; use commas to join clauses.

× Yes, I do prefer to chat with a group of people over only one friend because they they have different different point of view and they motivate each other's.

✓ Yes, I prefer to chat with a group of people rather than only one friend because they have different points of view and they motivate each other.

Unnecessary auxiliary 'do' in affirmative present. Remove repetitions. 'Point of view' should be plural 'points of view'. 'Each other's' is incorrect possessive; use 'each other' reciprocal pronoun.

× So only one friend cannot motivate you and a group of people motivated to you.

✓ A single friend may not motivate you, but a group of people can.

Unnatural phrasing and incorrect verb form 'motivated to you'. Use modal 'may' for possibility and simple 'can' for ability; simplify sentence structure.

× Yes, I do prefer to communicate face to face, uh, because on social media we can't express our feeling on face to face.

✓ Yes, I prefer to communicate face to face because on social media we can't express our feelings as well as we can face to face.

Remove unnecessary 'do'. 'Feeling' should be plural 'feelings'. Improve comparison structure: 'as well as we can face to face' clarifies meaning.

× We understand the feelings of, uh, in front of people and uh, we, we do feel each other and that's it.

✓ We understand people's feelings when we are face to face; we can sense each other's emotions.

Awkward preposition 'of in front of' fixed to 'people's feelings when we are face to face'. Use 'each other's emotions' for reciprocal feeling. Removed filler words.

× Yes, I argue with all my friends.

✓ Yes, I argue with some of my friends sometimes.

Original 'all my friends' may be unintended absolute; adding 'some' and 'sometimes' fits conversational nuance. Keeps present simple for habitual actions.

× We often live argue with when we when we watch matches.

✓ We often argue when we watch matches.

Extraneous word 'live' and repetitions removed; correct structure is 'argue when we watch matches'.

× When my friends choose different team then I choose that I choose.

✓ When my friends choose a different team, I choose another team.

Missing article before 'different team' and unclear repetition. Use 'a different team' and 'another team' for clarity; add comma for clause.