Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence, avoid repetition and grammatical errors, and provide one brief supporting detail. Use linking words if needed.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with friends, especially my close ones. Since I'm not very outgoing, I prefer deep conversations with a small circle rather than large groups.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and specific examples, and fix grammar. Use linking words to organize points and avoid vague endings.

Exemplo: We usually talk about recent events in our lives, hobbies and family matters. For example, last week we discussed a new hobby I started and how my sister is doing at university.

Sugestão: Answer directly with a reason and a concise supporting detail. Correct grammar (introvert, close friends) and finish the sentence; avoid trailing off.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one because I'm an introvert and I find deeper conversations easier with a single close friend. In large groups I often feel uncomfortable and don't join the discussion.

Sugestão: This is a good structure: give balanced view and reason. Improve grammar and vocabulary (e.g., "online" not "through the Internet", "can't express"), and use linking words like "however".

Exemplo: It depends. For acquaintances I prefer talking online because it's more convenient, but for close friends I prefer face-to-face communication because it's easier to convey emotions and avoid misunderstandings.

Sugestão: Start with a direct answer and give a concise reason and example. Correct grammar (opinions, doesn't affect our relationship) and avoid repetition.

Exemplo: Yes, we sometimes argue because we have different opinions, but it doesn't affect our friendship. For instance, we recently disagreed about where to go on holiday, but we quickly resolved it by listening to each other.

× Yes I do like chatting with friends, especially with the close friends. I'm not a very like active person so I only have a few friends and I only like to chat with really close of them.

✓ Yes, I do like chatting with friends, especially close friends. I'm not a very active person, so I only have a few friends and I only like to chat with those who are really close to me.

Errors: unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'close friends'; awkward phrase 'very like active' and wrong order; incorrect phrase 'close of them'. Reasons: 'close friends' is the correct noun phrase without 'the' when speaking generally; adjectives should be in normal order ('very active'); use plural demonstrative pronoun 'those' and preposition 'to' with 'close to me'. Suggestion: remove unnecessary articles, use standard adjective order, and replace 'of them' with 'those who are ... to me'. Use commas for clarity. Grammar problem type IDs: 22 and 12.

× The conversation between me and my friend you really close to the topic about recent life or recent hobbies or family situations 'cause I'm not a very outgoing person so I only talk to the closest friends so all of them know my.

✓ My conversations with my close friends are usually about recent life events, hobbies, or family situations, because I'm not very outgoing, so I only talk to my closest friends who know me well.

Errors: awkward structure 'The conversation between me and my friend you really close to the topic'; wrong pronoun case 'me' should be 'my conversations with my'; incorrect fragment 'know my' missing object; informal ' 'cause'. Reasons: Use subject noun phrase 'my conversations' and correct relative clause 'who know me well'. Provide complete clauses with objects. Suggestion: reorganize sentence to 'My conversations with my close friends are usually about ... because ...' and use 'know me well'. Grammar problem type IDs: 26 and 12.

× I definitely prefer chatting with only one friend because I am a very introvert type of person and I have fewer closet friends and I only check to who know me deeply. Sometimes when a huge group of people like we're sitting around, I just.

✓ I definitely prefer chatting with one friend because I am a very introverted person and I have few close friends; I only talk to those who know me well. Sometimes when a large group of people are sitting together, I just stay quiet.

Errors: 'introvert type of person' -> 'introverted person'; 'fewer closet friends' -> 'few close friends' ('fewer' used incorrectly); 'check to who know me deeply' is ungrammatical; 'huge group of people like we're sitting around' is incorrect phrasing and missing verb 'are sitting'; sentence fragment 'I just.' incomplete. Reasons: Use 'introverted' adjective, 'few' for small quantity, 'those who' as relative pronoun, and complete the final clause with a verb. Suggestion: replace awkward phrases, correct quantifier, and finish the thought. Grammar problem type IDs: 13 and 14.

× Well, it depends. For the people that I don't know well, I like to talk with them through the Internet 'cause we are not know each other deeply. But for the people, those who are close with me, I prefer chatting with face to face cause on the Internet there's something that we couldn't express.

✓ Well, it depends. For people I don't know well, I like to talk to them over the Internet because we do not know each other well. But for people who are close to me, I prefer chatting face to face because online there are some things we cannot express.

Errors: 'talk with them through the Internet' -> 'talk to them over the Internet' (preposition and collocation); 'we are not know each other deeply' -> 'we do not know each other well' (auxiliary and adverb); 'close with me' -> 'close to me' (preposition); 'chatting with face to face' -> 'chatting face to face' (remove 'with'); 'there's something that we couldn't express' -> 'there are some things we cannot express' (tense/modal and count agreement). Reasons: Use correct prepositions and verb forms; use 'cannot' for ability/possibility and 'well' for degree. Suggestion: learn common collocations 'talk to', 'over the Internet', and practice correct auxiliary verbs and prepositions. Grammar problem type IDs: 11 and 12.

× Yes, of course I argue with friends. I mean in daily life, through the conversation with everyone. We might have different opinion. So sometimes we argue, but it won't influence anything 'cause we respect each other, we have different opinion and we know that we're the different.

✓ Yes, of course I argue with friends. I mean, in daily life through conversations with others we might have different opinions. So sometimes we argue, but it does not affect anything because we respect each other, we have different opinions and we know that we are different.

Errors: 'through the conversation with everyone' -> 'through conversations with others' (article and plurality); 'different opinion' should be plural 'different opinions'; 'it won't influence anything' -> 'it does not affect anything' (register and verb choice); 'we know that we're the different' -> 'we know that we are different' (extra article 'the' and word order). Reasons: Use plural for countable noun 'opinions' when speaking generally; remove unnecessary 'the'; choose more appropriate verbs 'affect' and use full negation 'do not' in formal correction. Suggestion: use plural nouns for general statements and avoid adding 'the' before adjectives used as predicates.