Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more precise and natural: state your preference clearly and give a brief reason. Avoid repetition (chatting vs talking over a phone call) and keep within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: Yes, I enjoy chatting with my friends, especially in person, because it's more personal and we can read each other's expressions. It helps us connect better than a phone call.

Sugestão: Avoid saying you ‘gossip’ as it sounds negative; be more specific about topics and give one or two examples. Use linking words to connect ideas (for example, 'for instance' or 'also').

Exemplo: We usually talk about our day-to-day lives and future plans; for instance, we discuss work, studies, and upcoming events. We also share funny stories about people we know, which makes the conversation light and entertaining.

Sugestão: Provide a clear topic sentence and a concise reason. Use linking words like 'because' and avoid filler phrases ('for like').

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with one or two close friends because conversations are more meaningful and I feel more comfortable sharing personal thoughts.

Sugestão: Reduce hesitations and repetition. Start with a clear statement, give a reason, and add a brief contrast using a linking word such as 'however' or 'although'. Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Exemplo: As an introvert, I prefer communicating via social media like Instagram because it's more comfortable and less draining. However, I still meet close friends face-to-face occasionally for important events.

Sugestão: Be grammatically correct and concise. Use a clear topic sentence and then a brief example or explanation. Remove stutters and complete the thought with linking words like 'however' or 'sometimes'.

Exemplo: Not usually; we mostly respect each other's views. However, sometimes small arguments happen when our opinions differ, but we quickly resolve them by discussing calmly.

× I prefer chatting with my friends rather than talking with them over a phone call.

✓ I prefer chatting with my friends rather than talking to them on the phone.

Use 'talk to someone' (not 'talk with them' is acceptable but 'talk to them' is more natural here) and the correct preposition for telephone is 'on the phone' not 'over a phone call'. Also 'a phone call' is unnecessary; use 'on the phone' for natural phrasing.

× We mostly talk about our lives and we also gossip about others.

✓ We mostly talk about our lives and also gossip about others.

The phrase 'we also' is redundant with the second 'we'. Removing the repeated subject makes the sentence smoother. This is a stylistic/prepositional flow correction rather than a strict grammatical rule.

× I think it's our favorite part of our conversation.

✓ I think it's our favorite part of the conversation.

Using the definite article 'the conversation' is more natural when referring to the recurring topic of their chats. 'Our conversation' can be used, but 'the conversation' avoids repetition and sounds more idiomatic.

× I do not have many friends, I have really close friends for like 2 or 3 so I prefer chatting with them rather than a group of friends.

✓ I do not have many friends; I have only two or three really close friends, so I prefer chatting with them rather than with a group.

Use numeric words 'two or three' and place 'only' for clarity. Also correct punctuation (semicolon/comma) and add 'with' before 'a group' for parallel structure. 'for like 2 or 3' is informal and numerals should be words in speech-style correction.

× I'm I'm really introvert person so I would I love to I love staying at home so I would prefer chatting with them or be connected with them via social medias like Facebook or Instagram.

✓ I'm really an introverted person, so I love staying at home and prefer chatting with them or staying connected via social media like Facebook or Instagram.

Multiple issues: missing article 'an' before 'introverted person'; adjective form 'introverted' is correct; remove repeated fragments and redundant 'I would'. Use 'social media' (uncountable) not 'social medias'. Use parallel gerund forms 'chatting' and 'staying connected' for consistency.

× But occasionally I meet them face to face but.

✓ But occasionally I meet them face to face.

The sentence ends with an extra 'but', creating a fragment and redundant conjunction. Removing the final 'but' completes the sentence.

× Not really, but when we have different opinion about a topic they they are. Might be an argument sometimes.

✓ Not really, but when we have different opinions about a topic, there might sometimes be an argument.

Use plural 'opinions' after 'different'. Remove repeated 'they'. Combine fragments into one sentence: 'there might sometimes be an argument' places verb correctly. Also add comma after the subordinate clause. Ensure correct word order for 'might sometimes be'.