Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Be more direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (Yes or No), then give one or two specific reasons with linking words. Avoid repeating and correct basic grammar (e.g. 'communicate' → 'talk with them').

Exemplo: Yes, I do like chatting with friends, but mainly in person rather than by phone or social media. For example, I prefer face-to-face conversations because they feel more natural and I can see people’s expressions, so I rarely text.

Sugestão: Organize answer: topic sentence followed by specific topics and a brief example. Use linking words (for example, and) and correct grammar (e.g. 'my friends and I', 'advantages and disadvantages'). Avoid filler words.

Exemplo: My friends and I usually talk about schoolwork and hobbies. For example, we discuss homework deadlines and, more recently, I’ve been talking with them about my new car — its advantages and disadvantages, such as good fuel efficiency but limited trunk space.

Sugestão: Give a clear topic sentence and add a brief reason with a linking word. Use correct adjective form ('introverted') and avoid absolute negatives like 'never' if not accurate.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting with just one friend rather than a group because I’m introverted. For instance, one-on-one conversations feel more comfortable and allow for deeper, more relaxed discussions.

Sugestão: Begin with a clear preference, then give two specific reasons using linking words (for example, because, and). Use more natural expressions (e.g. 'see people’s emotions' instead of 'all people emotions') and avoid overstatements.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because you can read people’s emotions and see non-verbal cues like smiles and eye contact. Also, social media can feel impersonal and sometimes leads to negative comments, so I avoid chatting there.

Sugestão: Be truthful but moderate. Start with a direct answer, then explain briefly how you handle disagreements. Avoid exaggeration ('never') and unnatural phrases ('let them the thing').

Exemplo: Generally, I don’t argue with my friends; if we disagree I listen to their point of view and try to find a compromise. For example, if a friend insists on an idea, I acknowledge it and suggest discussing it calmly rather than arguing.

× Do you mean chatting with phones? No I do not like texting my friends but I do like communicate.

✓ Do you mean chatting on phones? No, I do not like texting my friends, but I do like communicating.

The original sentence has a pronoun/verb usage problem and a missing gerund. 'Chatting with phones' is unnatural; use 'chatting on phones'. 'Do like communicate' is incorrect because 'like' should be followed by the gerund 'communicating'. Also add commas for clarity.

× I try.

✓ I try to.

The short reply 'I try.' is incomplete in context. To indicate attempting to communicate, use the infinitive 'to' as part of 'I try to (do that)'. Alternatively expand to 'I try to communicate.' for clarity.

× So if you mean chatting outside, I try.

✓ So if you mean chatting in person, I try.

The phrase 'chatting outside' is ambiguous and not the expected contrast with phone/social media; use 'in person'. The structure 'I try' is vague; better 'I try' followed by an infinitive or 'I do.' Here 'I try' is acceptable but 'I do' or 'I do like that' can be clearer.

× Yes I do like but from social medias no.

✓ Yes, I do, but not on social media.

Pronoun/phrase usage and article/plural errors: 'from social medias' is incorrect—use 'on social media' (uncountable). The sentence also needs commas and clearer negation 'not on'.

× Me and my friends, we usually chat about school homework, but we also like to chat about cars because I bought the new car and the Want to know uh, this advantage, disadvantage and advantage about my car.

✓ My friends and I usually chat about school homework, but we also like to chat about cars because I bought a new car and I want to know its advantages and disadvantages.

Pronoun order: say 'My friends and I' rather than 'Me and my friends'. 'The new car' implies a specific known car; 'a new car' is natural. 'Want to know uh, this advantage, disadvantage and advantage' has word order and repetition errors—use 'I want to know its advantages and disadvantages.' Also remove filler 'uh' in formal response.

× I never like to have a lot of friends, so I prefer chatting only with one friend because I'm introvert.

✓ I do not like having a lot of friends, so I prefer chatting with only one friend because I'm introverted.

Use 'do not like having' instead of 'never like to have' for naturalness. 'Chatting only with one friend' is better as 'chatting with only one friend'. 'I'm introvert' needs adjective form 'introverted' or 'an introvert'.

× As I mentioned, I only like to communicate face to face because you can see all people emotions, the smile, the beauty of the eyes.

✓ As I mentioned, I prefer to communicate face to face because you can see people's emotions, their smiles, and the beauty of their eyes.

Preposition/possessive errors: use 'people's emotions' (possessive) not 'all people emotions'. 'The smile' should be plural or possessive 'their smiles'. 'The beauty of the eyes' needs 'their eyes'. Also 'prefer to communicate' is more natural than 'only like to communicate'.

× But from social media sometimes people are very bullied.

✓ But on social media, people are sometimes bullied a lot.

Preposition error: use 'on social media' not 'from'. Word order and voice improved: 'people are sometimes bullied' is natural. 'Very bullied' is awkward; use 'bullied a lot' or 'frequently bullied'.

× No, I'll never argue with my friends.

✓ No, I never argue with my friends.

Using 'I'll never argue' (future) is acceptable but the speaker likely means a habitual generalisation; use present simple 'I never argue' for habits. This aligns with other present-tense statements.

× They always want to prove their opinion, but I let them the thing that their opinion is very excellent, fantastic, and I never argue with them.

✓ They always want to defend their opinions, but I let them; I think their opinions are fine and I never argue with them.

Pronoun and verb choice: 'prove their opinion' is awkward—use 'defend their opinions'. 'I let them the thing that' is ungrammatical; replace with 'I let them' or 'I accept that'. 'Very excellent, fantastic' is redundant and unnatural; use 'fine' or 'valid'. Also plural 'opinions' matches 'their'.