Chatting— Part 1 Relatório

Sugestão: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains incomplete sentences. Try to give a clear topic sentence and support it with specific details, avoiding redundancy and incomplete thoughts.

Exemplo: Yes, I really enjoy chatting with my friends because it helps me relax and share my thoughts. For example, we often discuss our daily experiences and interesting events that happened recently.

Sugestão: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and lacks coherence. Use correct tense and linking words to make your answer clearer and more natural.

Exemplo: I usually talk about what has happened to me recently and my current thoughts. Additionally, I enjoy sharing our favorite movies and books, which often leads to interesting conversations.

Sugestão: Your answer has good ideas but the last sentence is unclear. Use linking words to contrast your preferences and explain reasons more clearly.

Exemplo: I prefer chatting one-on-one because it is easier to discuss sensitive topics. However, chatting in a group is also fun since it allows more diverse opinions and lively interactions.

Sugestão: Your answer is clear but contains minor grammatical errors. Use comparative structures and linking words to improve coherence and accuracy.

Exemplo: I prefer face-to-face communication because it allows for better understanding, especially when discussing sensitive topics. Although social media is an easier way to share thoughts quickly, it lacks the personal touch of in-person conversations.

Sugestão: Your answer is confusing and repetitive. Try to express your ideas clearly and avoid contradictions. Use linking words to explain the positive side of arguing.

Exemplo: I sometimes argue with my friends, but these disagreements are usually minor. In fact, arguing can help strengthen our friendships by clearing misunderstandings and improving communication.

× What I recently think about it and I Yeah.

✓ What I recently think about it is, yeah.

The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a proper verb structure, making it unclear. Adding 'is' clarifies the sentence and completes the thought.

× I usually talk about what I was happened and what I'm thinking about, and I like to share our favorite movies or books.

✓ I usually talk about what has happened and what I'm thinking about, and I like to share our favorite movies or books.

The phrase 'what I was happened' is incorrect. The correct form is 'what has happened' to indicate past events relevant to the present.

× I prefer to chat with the individual because one to one communication is better to share very sensitive topics and the group is also fun, but it's better to enjoy.

✓ I prefer to chat with an individual because one-to-one communication is better for sharing very sensitive topics, and the group is also fun, but it's better to enjoy it.

Use 'an individual' instead of 'the individual' for general reference. 'One-to-one' should be hyphenated as a compound adjective. 'Better to share' should be 'better for sharing' to use the correct preposition and gerund form. Also, 'better to enjoy' is incomplete; adding 'it' clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to communicate face to face. Social media is a easier way to share our thoughts with my friends, but it's not useful for sharing sensitive topics. So my face to face communications is better.

✓ I prefer to communicate face to face. Social media is an easier way to share my thoughts with my friends, but it's not useful for sharing sensitive topics. So my face-to-face communication is better.

Use 'an' before a vowel sound ('easier'). 'Our thoughts' changed to 'my thoughts' for consistency with 'my friends'. 'Face to face' should be hyphenated when used as an adjective ('face-to-face'). 'Communications' should be singular 'communication' in this context.

× I sometimes argue with some of my friends, but I never I've never argued with some of friends and sometimes it allows me to strengthen our friendships.

✓ I sometimes argue with some of my friends, but I've never argued with some of them, and sometimes it allows me to strengthen our friendships.

The phrase 'I never I've never' is redundant; 'I've never' suffices. 'Some of friends' is missing the pronoun 'them' to refer back to 'friends'. Adding 'them' corrects the pronoun usage.